I love this retelling. You are a very talented writer.

This is a wonderful story. I'm really enjoying it.
Thank you,
Mickey

I just found this site and your story is the first I have read all the way through. Hopefully there is more to go with the other books. well done.

I really love this story I just wish there was more.

Anorexic - what about dyslexic

I'm re-reading your exceptional story and loving it even more this time. It makes so darned much sense, I can hardly bear it. Thank you for sharing it with us and thank you for leaving it up so I can laugh and get misty eyed all over again.

That was incredible. The whole things was really, very nicely developed and I was quite happy it was kept a lovely PG. All of the characters were kept the same and yet you added just a hint of your style into them.

I just finished rereading this. It was such a pleasure - again. Many thanks.

I'm so sorry I didn't review each chapter but I've selfishly clicked on the next chapter as I finished the previous one. What a smart read for us! This Bella and this Edward were adorable, witty, and so lovable. Thank you for completing.

OMG! This is like my favourite fic now! I love it! Thank you for being amazing and writing it! :D

This was a fun story! Thanks for writing!

This is really neat! Fantastic story!

This is really neat! I like her insightful train of thought. Nice writing!

Very interesting! Thanks for writing!

So. This fanfic is a diamond sitting in a coal mine. If you aren't being payed for your true writing talent "in real life", you should be. Throw us a bone if you're lurking as an author over at Amazon, all right? I would happily pay for your work.