|Reviews for Type O Negative|
| cherryrose89 chapter 13 . 5/12/2012
aww this story was good! this cant be the end of it? it seems so incomplete! i want to know what happens next?
| Cr01 chapter 13 . 4/29/2012
Although it follows the original storyline, the changes you've made make it more appealing than the actual book.
A very well written piece!
And I have to say, the vampirecaterpillar logic is very interesting.
Good work :)
| Merina Green chapter 13 . 4/27/2012
I loved the story! Comparing the burning change to become a vampire to a caterpillar's change was clever. And I love Bella's continuing emphasis to Edward about how he had a choice...and making him see that he had always made the right ones! And the bit with him having saved her grandmother a long time ago, I've never seen that done before - but it seems so obvious now that I've read it! Good idea!
| Knitchick chapter 13 . 4/17/2012
I have to tell you, when I first started your story i was unsure if I would like it. You have a very dry sense of humor, and most people can't pull off dry. You rock dry (that is meant as a compliment even though it sounds wierd).
By chapter three I was completely hooked on your story and couldn't stop reading. Excellent!
Thanks for sharing.
| muffinmom chapter 13 . 4/10/2012
Love Love Love this story! Too sweet and funny and just well done! Fantastic place to stop it too, I like that you stopped at the meadow rather than taking all the way to Bella becoming a vamp yaddi yadda etc (everyone's been there, done that, we don't need rehashing!).
And you're just too sneaky with that ingenious reference to Renesmee LMFAO!
Thanks for sharing this story! (Now I'm off to read your other fics...)
And YES I read this all at work (shh!) which made for an enjoyable and oddly somewhat productive day LOL!
| muffinmom chapter 3 . 4/10/2012
You did not just go Myers Brigg on me, did you? O my frigging God I think I luvs u (or at least I luvs this story !)
| muffinmom chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
OMG I'm dying here this is just TOO GOOD! You're going to make me read this fic while at work, evil evil but good evil but I can't stay away!
| harkie5 chapter 13 . 3/28/2012
Cute story, you kept me laughing!
| SqueakyZorro chapter 13 . 3/24/2012
I really enjoyed your story. Bella's voice was wonderfully humorous and down-to-earth, and I love that your Edward was smart enough not to make it past the Jacksonville city limits. Thanks!
| Seekingbecca chapter 8 . 3/23/2012
| Doumbea chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
I'm French, so excuse my english !
I read the translation of this story by Bluelinote, and I want to say to you : you're an amazing writer ! Thank you for all the pleasure to read you !
| LeeseeQ chapter 13 . 3/21/2012
Like I said in a review the other day, I don't know how it is that I've managed to read hundreds (really if I'm being honest it probably more like a couple thousand- literally) of fanfic pieces and yet you've flown under my radar. How is this POSSIBLE?
I can't think of any appropriate compliments that cover how much I enjoyed your stories, just this: I've just devoured all four of your fics in two days, generally forgoing food, bathing, housekeeping etc - 'nuff said.
Thanks for taking the time to write for us:)
| Svaler chapter 13 . 3/12/2012
13 is an amazing number. I made my theory test for cardriving, and the table where I made that test was also number 13 :)
BTW this story was frikking amazing (: gonna add it to favourite, because it matches SM's goodness, maybe even better then twilight, because it was a lot more action and danger. I loved the scene from the point she walked out of the hotel room, he found her , threw her in the water and eventually she found out what he is by simplu saying; whay are you a vampire?
| Svaler chapter 5 . 3/12/2012
you're writing isn't proffesional, but it's absolutely amazing with the
I'm going: ...
and stuff like that :D I love how that way you describe shory what Bella's thinking.
| Svaler chapter 4 . 3/12/2012
even though the story is finished, this chapter deserves a review. bella's crying :(