|Reviews for High School Failure|
| Purple Pearls Turned Black chapter 5 . 8/2/2013
I don't like this, what Natsume has done to Mikan is beyond bad. I think he's pathetic to think that her leaving has given him the right to think he's the victim and that he's the one hurting the most. It annoys me even more that that he practically blamed her for the fact that the old Mikan is gone, when that's not true at all. I really wish Mikan won't fall for a bastard like that, and instead fall in love with someone more deserving. Because the way you portrayed Natsume wasn't done very well and it makes me hate him.
You probably didn't want that, but to make things short, he sees Mikan as his possession and that he has every right to have her back when she left him, when in fact he doesn't, I don't feel like he loves her. But like I said, it's because of the way you've written the story, so I'm going to drop this and move on...
| unknow98 chapter 5 . 10/12/2012
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| EchizenRyoma chapter 5 . 6/29/2011
wow. will they get back together? i really hope so.
| Ornea chapter 5 . 8/4/2009
please update ASAP! love it!
you read twilight? :D
| Kyra Marie chapter 5 . 7/10/2009
Poor Kevin :(
Natsume talks a lot here. It's a bit OOC for him, but, hey, it's cool. I get to imagine the sound of his voice. *daydreams*
Wow. Luna's an angel in this fic. That's a first... well, it is. My fics has Luna being the Queen Biatch.
Oh, and I just can NOT believe Natsume. Darn him and his pride.
I like the part when Mikan told Kevin that he's still young, and all hope exists for him. It made me think for a full thirty seconds and ponder over the statement. It's a wonder what less than ten words can do to you.
Natsume you are going down with what you did with Mikan. LOL XD
It's a nice plot you have hear; very original, I must say. Haven't read anything with the same plot as this.
Good luck with your upcoming chapters. More power. :)
| natsumikan15 chapter 5 . 6/2/2009
love the chappie!
hope u applaud soon!
| Scarlet Acoustics chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
hi kyria! hehe..
wow! Natsume can really let Mikan feel human again.. guilty? hahaXD oh well.. cant wait for the next chapter... hopefully something great will happen next chapter.. hahaXP
| scribbles'04 chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
hey Trishaii !
love the chappie. ;D
so, what will Kevin call Natsume and Mikan? mommy and daddy? okaa-san and otou-san? especially since Mikan's flight attendant, Michelle died. Will there be a love triangle? like 2 guys fighting for Mikan's love? to whom will Mikan show her true self? wahh! It's getting frustrating. It's really unpredictable.
keep up the good work,
| FireRosePetal chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
aw how sad for kevin T.T but that family is messed up seriously . don't they noe accidents happen sheesh but at least mikan's learning how to feel :D
| Xx-roSeprincess-xX chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
It was so beautiful!
I hope you'll continue this story, it has a big impact on me when I read it. It is quite new and your writing style is good. I like it so much! Goodluck!
| mizusuwings124 chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
yeah, it's very long...
my eyes are already tired of reading_
but i like it..
they kissed!well, natsume kissed her...but still, they kiss..hehe
so they'll adopt poor kevin now?
they'll be like a family..
natsume will succeed in changing mikan right?
pls. update soon...
sigh, classes is about to start soon, but i hope u could still update faster...
| Ruby Romance chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
yay! nicely done! natsume and mikan will become guardians of kevin, but i pity him, he lost his parents and aunt, and his family is blaming him for the death. anyways, keep up the gud work! natsume is so kawaii when he is with kevin by the way! hehehe
| Topaz Tsubasa chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
Interesting story! I can't believe you actually made Natsume do that! I was ready to claw his face off with my nails when he hurt Mikan. It's a really good plot because it's unexpected and unique. It makes the story more interesting and has that pull to make you want to know more, make you want to see what will happen and make you stick. Nice ending to this chapter, though. At least he's making progress. But 10 years? 10 frickin' years? That's an awful long wait and a huge waste of time on the characters' part. They missed out on a lot. I just hope that Natsume gets Mikan to feel again. I feel so sorry for Kevin! The poor kid! At least Mikan and Natsume are there to help out. Thank you very much and Bye-B! _
| The Little Hobbit chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
*sniff* *sniff* I feel so sorry for Kevin. That's so sad. Not to mention of how some people think he's a jinx. But for some reason, whenever Mikan was fighting with Natsume I couldn't help but laugh. They remind me of a married couple who just can't stop fighting hahaha:). I hope things turn out for the better between Mikan and Natsume. Can't wait!:D