|Reviews for Prisoner|
| ElealehBlue chapter 1 . 6/14/2017
Awwwwwww! :)))))))))) Such a great plot, and such a sweet, fluffy ending T_T :)
I know this is a little late, (like, EIGHT YEARS late) but this is now in my favorites list :)
Well done, and God bless :) - Ellie
| EcoReibun chapter 1 . 5/18/2017
this is one of the best reads one had in a wile. thanks for writing this. i live the attention to the characters emotions in it.
| GhostHex chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
| My Stormy Sky chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
This is really good! Honestly I want to keep reading and see how this one fight would change public opinion and the Fentons' opinions now!
| Good Idea chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
I really want to know what happens in the future!
| 00 Non C. Anon 00 chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
| GreenLikeACrayon chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
What? I haven't revieed this yet?
It's absolutly awesome and I would have it as my own personal canon. greatly written .
| seantriana chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
| Writer's-BlockDP chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
This is so sweet! Loved the Fenton's reaction to the Wail, and the hug at the end. You're a fabulous writer; thank you for sharing :)
| Tibki chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
poor Wulf! i feel so sad for him...
there are a couple timeline screwups here-when Danny got his wail, he knew that Jazz knew.
but hey, its AU, so u could've twisted the DP universe so that it worked out, right?
amazing story. is a sequel asking for too much? ;P
| serin2 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
You do know that your setting is Episode 14 (Public Enemies), and that Danny doesn't get the Ghostly Wail until Episode 28/29 (The Ultimate Enemy)? Also,it might be nice to note that in Episode 16 his max speed was clocked at 122 mph?
I understand that you might have needed to power him up to fit the task you wanted, but you should have thought of a different way to go about it if you wanted this to truly be a 'what would happen if this was different' fic. You could have had Danny out smart him, like he constantly does with his enemies in the show. Or you could have him prematurly develop the Wail, (Though that would turn him into a human, so I'd suggest something else. Like Ice powers.)
Yes, it would have been more effort, but it would have made this more realistic.
| Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Aw! Adorable ending, and an overall action-packed, emotion-ridden piece. :) Excellent job.
I especially liked the way you described the Ghostly Wail from Maddie's POV: "a wail—a long, lonely and angry cry that made her want to clap her hands over her ears and sob at the despair that echoed in every quivering note."
I guess that's just how I imagine it to be, 'cause I have a love of the angsty drama. :D
Thanks for writing!
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
great story. Wow. That's sad.
| Aquawyrm chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
That was great. Thanks for the warning that you did the ghostly wail thing on purpose...I almost freaked out over that. Heh heh...it wouldn't have worked so well without it, though, and artistic liscence IS permited in fanfiction.
It would actually be neat to see the series re-written with that little twist in it. Some of the things affected...well, public opinion of him wouldn't be so bad, and Valerie might be a little less vengeful (or maybe more, you never know).
In The Million Dollar Ghost, well, it just wouldn't happen; the main reason Vlad was able to put that bounty on him was because he WAS Public Enemy Number One.
Huh. Public Enemies was one of the more important episodes in setting the place up. If not for that, he wouldn't have half the bad reputation he does for the rest of the series.
| Writer's-BlockDP chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Aw... adorable ending ;) I love anything involving DannyJazz bonding or his parents reanalyzing the nature of Phantom. Very cool idea, very well-written. And the ghostly wail just -had- to be in there :D Excellent work!