Reviews for When I See You Smile
cheshire15 chapter 21 . 6/9/2017
Love this story !
rclaurel chapter 21 . 1/4/2014
Love your story, Hope to hear from you as soon as you can...
yep.fanfictionaddict123 chapter 21 . 8/5/2013
come on! what happens next?:(
Kagblueeyes25 chapter 21 . 3/18/2013
It's been 2 years so the chance of an epi is nil to none I'm guessing. For a first story it was great. I likes the pace. A little quick to end but it was good. I really enjoyed it .
dont1855 chapter 4 . 3/8/2013
it would be nice if that was the LAST we saw of Tanya i cant stand that bitch as for Mike I cant wait to see what Edward an EM do to him the ASSHOLE :) DEB.
dont1855 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
yep Mikes an ass he's always was one :) DEB.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 21 . 12/12/2012
well I have read all of this story so far it has been great but one more chapter will not finish it what about their marriage what about all of their babies what about the doctor job Edward really wants what about the heaven ever after what about Jessica and alex think about it don't just stop I am so tired of stories ending that way
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 20 . 12/12/2012
where is Jessica she went with Bella to the bathroom? how did she get outside what is happing
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 19 . 12/12/2012
so now Mike has hurt another woman I told you that is what people like him do I know this for a fact lived through it just barley though. will she tell him about the note? will Edward tell her what Emmitt said. will Mike come after her again this time he will kill her if not stopped. I lived through this as a teenager and I never dated this person never knew him this person saw a picture of me in a photo studio and became obsessed ,found out where I went to I worked and where I lived,atried to kill my brother by rigging his brakes because he thought he was my boyfriend cause I w as always with him,I didn't date real strick parents and I was too busy with school and work I was going to finish school and go to college with full scholarship at age 16youngest law student in the state of okla. and a girl at that till he cam along and almost killed me
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 18 . 12/12/2012
the wedding was beautiful,even with the knew just what to say to Alice you would think he is the older brother instead of the was Bella told Tanya off and most important I lovrd the way mother told her off.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 17 . 12/12/2012
seems like charley likes Edward. Edward find there is or ever has been anything with Jacob and knows he loves her and he is thinking about marriage that's great let it hapen
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 16 . 12/11/2012
it is about time they finaly got around to letting each other know they love each other as well as having I never would have thought that Tanya would actually tell the truth would you
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 15 . 12/11/2012
I guess Tanya gets what Tanya wants and it seems lke its edward
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 14 . 12/11/2012
what is there to forgive so she fell for he creep not her fault or Bella's you always protect those you lve Mike's a pussy he will never fight a man but if not stoped he will always beat up small helpless women we know of two and there are probley more
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 13 . 12/11/2012
yes he had every right to know and he took it the way I knew he loves Bella and she loves her now next lets go a little more in the love making ok
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