Person chapter 4 . 7/30
Omg love ur story

More Bella/Edward pls!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23
I am excited to read the next chapter
young nandy chapter 4 . 2/13
Please contine,this ,its the shit so please don't stop writing
bubbles chapter 4 . 1/7
That was so good the detail and description must have taken i while ur quite talented however the conversation between the sister should feel more relaxed as it feels like something is wrong or there is a backstory maybe there is i wouldnt know ur the fabulous writer i love it and keep going x
Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2015
So much fun! Can't wait for your next chapter! Maybe try to keep the grammar correct, but otherwise you do a very good job at making the reader feel like they are in the moment.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/2/2015
I loved this. The differant point of views were amazing and I ahev never imagined Alice's point of view. You are very talented.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/30/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2015
Soooooooo hot!
I am humping while reading this so yeah, ya done a great job!
Hi chapter 4 . 8/16/2015
Omg i am masturbating and humping while i read this it is soooooooo super hot! Well done. Make one where they have sex. Good hard rough sex!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2015
*Thumbs up* mayb a orgy in future?
d chapter 4 . 5/22/2015
love it
lol chapter 4 . 11/25/2014
try v
vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

looks like yr pointing down
jazz chapter 4 . 11/4/2014
Hi I like how you called him jazz that's what my family calls me my name is Jazmyne that's why they call me jazz and jazzyjuice
jazz chapter 4 . 11/4/2014
Please I need MORE! !
jazz chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
I love it keep writing more chapters with romance your going to be a hit one day
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