Reviews for How it should be
michi-no167 chapter 6 . 1/17/2011
OMG i actually cried while reading this
Kishasho123 chapter 3 . 3/18/2010
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! so far. :)

Keep up the awesome writing! :)
helendela chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Hi ... lost your way a bit in the middle there but back on track. Still a bit confused as to the new people but basic storyline good. Lots of places to go now e.g. conversation/leaving her Mum; having to go back to school trauma (old home or new home!); who does Claire live with; getting to know everyone ... Enjoying it all so far.
angeleyenc chapter 8 . 9/7/2009
yay! she's staying! plz update! this is good!
agh0986 chapter 8 . 8/22/2009
I think it was a great chapter...I'd like to see what Quil went through when Claire initially left. Also, if Claire's dad knew about Quil when she was young, that would be something you could write abot. Obviously Quil and Claire's relationship is bound to grow in the coming time. You're doing great!
angeleyenc chapter 7 . 8/6/2009
plz plz update! this is good! yay! quil found her!
squee77 chapter 7 . 8/5/2009
Update soon!
Ally145 chapter 7 . 8/5/2009
Update as soon as you can
agh0986 chapter 7 . 8/5/2009
Aww yay Quil to the rescue! You're doing a great job, I can tell there will be adorable awkward situatins soon with Quil and Claire :)
Ally145 chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
UPDATE :)
angeleyenc chapter 6 . 7/29/2009
yay! quil! plz update! this is good!
Distracted procrastination chapter 6 . 7/29/2009
aw this is sad. Please write more.
agh0986 chapter 6 . 7/29/2009
Great chapter, I'm so glad you updated the story, I love it! I hope you update soon I am really anxious to know what happened!
squee77 chapter 6 . 7/29/2009
Update soon!
angeleyenc chapter 5 . 7/6/2009
no! quil! go after her! plz update! this is good!
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