Reviews for His Biggest Mistake
WhenDayMeetsDark chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
That was so amazing I can't even put it into words(:
TessoMesso chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
OMG! that was soo AWESOME! i loved it! begining, middle, end total genus
SkylineXenith chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I agree with PP-SSC on this. But still well written.
PPP SSC chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I'm honestly amazed that Soren managed to keep the will to live after Ike died, especially considering how he died. And as for the author's note-yeah, "except for one sentence" indeed.

"Ike... the most beautiful man in existence." One

"The most perfect." Two

"The most wonderful." Three

"He knew that the feelings he had for Ike were not mutual." Four

"Sure, they had been great friends and comrades, and Soren would go as far as to say he loved Ike." Five

And that's not counting the fact that if it was just friendship the referred-to "debate" wouldn't exist at all.

But I think that the way that Ike died increased the impact of the story greatly. I had thought that it was somehow Soren's fault that Ike died from the beginning, but that it was indirect.