Reviews for Drafted for Duty
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Poor child
Yu Nguyen chapter 7 . 7/2/2013
Great story... did you take the ideas from Hellboy lol. XD
Wordmangler chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
Interesting new character, use of existing characters, and well written on the whole. There is some pretty rapid and confusing cross-cutting between points of view even in the same paragraph, but apart from that it is a smooth read.
PeaceLightVictory chapter 12 . 9/22/2011
Hey... well, first I wanted to say that I love your Susan/Dr. C idea. ) I've really enjoyed the sweet moments. On the other hand, I'm getting a little irked with how much you 'borrow' stuff from the X-Men. If you do continue writing stories about the monsters, please be a bit more original.
Ngoc Chau chapter 15 . 11/7/2009
"Bite me"

Link is so mean... but I love him!
Ngoc Chau chapter 13 . 11/7/2009
honestly, how can Brionni not remember the man she used to love with all her heart?
Ngoc Chau chapter 12 . 11/7/2009
nice chap...
Ngoc Chau chapter 11 . 11/7/2009
Poor Ramon!
Ngoc Chau chapter 10 . 11/7/2009
oh... monsters...
Ngoc Chau chapter 9 . 11/7/2009
How could Dr C not have recognized Brionni?

She was with him for years as his assistant and daughter!

How didn't he recognize her?

Did Christi memory wipe him in Dreams Follow Nightmares or something?


Ngoc Chau chapter 8 . 11/7/2009
short and sweet.
Ngoc Chau chapter 7 . 11/7/2009
sort of quick how Susan just tells him that she loves him.

No offence to you or anything, but I sort of wish for a fanfic that doesn't jump to the point too quickly with Susan and Dr C. But I guess I'm calling myself a hypocrite when I'm demanding that.

You're taking it nice and slow with Dreams Follow Nightmares.

Clever title, where did you come up with it?
Ngoc Chau chapter 6 . 11/7/2009

Monger's dead!

I get it now; in Dreams Follow Nightmares, you brought up Myra Hawkins and now I get it!

If and when Dr C meets Brionni, will he recognize her?

I know I must seem like a jackass, but I want to review each of your fanfics and chaps.

You are so intelligent for being able to tangle al these fanfics together in a single world. I really applaud you for it.

Kudos to you.

This chap was so far the best.
Ngoc Chau chapter 5 . 11/7/2009
Does this fanfic come after Wedding Woes or before?
Ngoc Chau chapter 4 . 11/7/2009
He asked for a car and he got a hunk of junk

I just love how yiu always find a way to sneak in some humour into your fanfics and chaps. Just love it!
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