|Reviews for Inspirations|
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
| notgonnasay09 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Alright, a great prologue, but I have just one nagging question...So, does Iruka blame Naruto for what happened? It was a little unclear to me and I was wondering if that could be elaborated upon. Other than that, I can't really find much to critique, seeing as this is a beginning instead of an end...
| thesilentstars chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
O.o! ::About to start anti-twilight rant, pauses, thinks...and...:: you know what never mind, I'm too tired to argue...so I'll give you a link of someone who does it better than me...but in all fairness I hope you do a better job than she did... vampirely./
| Kasuchi Koichi chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Nicely done. I’m glad that Naruto and Hinata will be on the same team. I just hope Sasuke isn’t on their team. I wouldn’t trust him near Hinata. Shino or Kiba (mostly Shino) would be the choice as their teammate and Kurenai would be their sensei since she would make sure to teach Hinata.
| SilentSinger948 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Great start. I'm glad that Naruto and Hinata are going to be on the same team.
Great start. Please update soon.
| PaulRap Raptor chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Keep up the good work.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Yeah, Hinata being on the same team makes sense since she knows about the fox. I can't wait to see what that team is though!
| Bobboky chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
| RAG DOLL the reviwer chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I realy enjoy your story, how did you ever come up with this stuff you must be a true Naruto fan to know how he would react to Hinatas first hug it was realy well written. Well Done.
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| Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Cool start! Please keep going.
| NaruHina Love birds chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Very cool, I like it.
can't wait for the next chapter
what kind beta reader you looking for?
| P5yCH0 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I wonder about that part of Naruto that thirsted for my death - or is that just about Kyuubi?
| Jolly Green chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
I like where this could go! I didn't see too many errors, but the ones you did make were minor at best. I wouldn't mind beta reading this story if you'd have me. _