Reviews for Chuck vs Ellie's Day
Shemiki chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I was finally able to read this after watching the season two finale. As always with Lyra, she's caught the personalities of the characters perfectly. Rest in peace.
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 1/5/2014

I don't even know what else to say. That was so brilliant.
s-david-m chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Nicely written. Can't say I agree with the widely held opinion that Chuck uploaded the new intersect to keep Sarah around though. When Chuck watched Bryce die in front of him, I think held truly realized the stakes of this 'game', and how badly the good guys needed help. I think he also realized what a huge difference he had made with the intersect, and he found purpose in that. A purpose he'd been lacking for many years.
retropanda37 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Beautiful description of Sarah's conflict and pain. I love fics from her perspective.
Lazielow chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Awesome job ! XP
chucksara4ever chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
excellent take on vs the ring and what could happen next. Sarah saves him again, but gives a hope for the future. Loved reading it.
NickyR chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
please tell me you will make another chapter or two.. I like where you are going with this and would love to see it expanded to after the party is over, the next day, the struggle to get the intersect out, their relationship..hiding it or not...caseys comments this could be huge, please think about it
jagged1 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Very nice - I especially liked this line:

'Bryce Larkin had died that night, and he had taken Sarah Bartowski with him.'

You really have a way of getting into the character's heads. Great job.
saraddictive chapter 1 . 5/6/2009

great story! i think you nailed the characters on the head, this as exactly how i pictured how things would pan out right affter the last episode. awesome fic!
fAteD lOvE chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Aw cuteness :D I think Chuck had other reasons why he accepted the intersect again as well as this one, but I like the way you wrote the dialogue and managed to keep it un-cheesy.

Nice one.
Kataragirl11 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I loved this one-shot about Chuck and Sarah! It was so fluffy and cute!
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I loved that; great job! But, if they're partbers... They CAN have something. Anyways, this was great; good job! (:

Kent Rigel chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I just fav'd three of your stories in the same ammount of time it took me to read them... your writing style is amazing.

I don't know how else to put it but the way that the words flow and paint the emotions, feelings and actions of the characters and how each story conveyed it to me, so that I could feel just a little bit of those same emotions instead of just reading about them... they're poetic.

I'm a dedicated fan of both Pushing Daisies and Chuck and I'm sure I've never encountered any stories on this site that are more powerful or intense in the way they capture and portray the interactions of each show's respective couple. You seem to be able to grasp that connection the characters have in a way I can barely understand.
alyss19 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I loved it! You really captured Sarah's emotions perfectly. :-)

Thanks and hope you write more soon!
Rac2873 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Great story until the end. Back to the forbidden love. If they go there again cancel the show now. I don't know about you but another season of we cannot be together because of the intersect is getting old. Bryce was going to be the intersect. Do you think she would be reassigned if she wanted to date him. I hope season 3 is notlike this at all. Well your intention must have worked because I feelj angsty.
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