|Reviews for Slipping away|
| Pixielullaby chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
I liked it for the most part. Though I'm a bit lost.
If they got into a car accident why didn't they get help?
Cellphones? No one saw the crash? Alice's family has money, didn't she have AAA or On Star or something like that?
How did Bella die?
Why weren't they found earlier? Bella is the police chief's daughter, I believe, personally, that the search for her would have been a tad more aggressive than it seemed to be.
Who was driving? I find that to be important for some reason..
Other than a few grammatical mistakes, I loved the emotion in this.
I like the idea of them being together forever as well.
I would have loved more details.
| vampyre in hiding chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
(sniff sniff) I love this story but its so freaking sad. But still lovin it
| xjadedjoy chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Whoa, so sad, but so adorable. I loved it. :D
| Starving Artist chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Absolutely beautiful! Well done!
| Beryl Butterfly chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
that was heartbreaking, wonderful, very sweet, lovely... but terribly terribly sad.
very well written!
| Jocelyn Torrent chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
You know, I quite enjoyed this. Not in a macabre way, for I am not sadistic (contrary to popular belief.) But it was extremely touching and...I feel depressed now, which should be taken as an apology. What a wonderful insight into the depth of their relationship.
| Tim chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
well this was increadably sad yet sweet at the same time. it really makes me wish i didnt have so many depending on me so i couldve followed Lisa. thank you for this wonderfull oneshot
| shania chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
aww :'( tht made me sad :( :( :( *sniffle* but still its agood story :)
| The Ninth Layer chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Your grammar is dreadful.