|Reviews for Bella's a vampire!|
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/12
worst fanfic ever!
you should actually do something you're GOOD at!
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/3
You have to do another story like that! So impressed
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/3
That last bit actually made me laugh hahaha!
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/3
Seriously they should all be long like this! Makes the readig last longer
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/3
These really are fab, you should deffo write a ton more!
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/3
You are so good! Literally cant stop reading x
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2013
200th reviewer yeah! i already read this story a few weeks ago but i love it so im gonna start reading it again ;p xo elisa
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
She should have her shield power
| SapphiRubyCrys chapter 12 . 6/3/2013
Love your story! :)
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/13/2013
Sorry buddy you can't read my mind why because I have a shield buy bye now
| DarkTwilight129 chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
why are these so dang short?!
| XHaileeX chapter 10 . 7/17/2012
xtremely ooc, and your chapters are extremely short. Edward and Bella's POVs are exactly the same other than one or two paragraphs. Everything is moving to fast, and I wish the story was more exciting. HOWEVER I must say your writing is good, and I think you are extremely advanced for your age.
| edwardsgirl1998 chapter 12 . 6/24/2011
Hi, This is very good! And as of what I know I beleive in America they are called finals. But im not excatcly sure due to to im almost only 11...
But great job!
| shikishikimirikato012345 chapter 11 . 4/30/2011
i really like thsi sory, especially since i dont have to scrool on and on and strain my eyes! you should be really pround of yourself! You were able to make such an original plot and stick to your story! (no sarcasm by the way, i'm being honest) . however, in chapter 11, when edward tells jessica to 'f' off, that was a bitt OOC, But oh well, edward is a sexy badboy.
| marsy-cat chapter 4 . 4/29/2011
I like your story, but these aren't chapters there paragraphs... Making them so short makes it really hard to get into the story or the characters...