|Reviews for Jaiden Malfoy|
| linkkinparkk chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Name your chapters girl! That is so annoying and untidy. Graphology aside (apart from your sucky grammar, sort it out!), I think it's cool to lay down the foundations to leave you free to write the story from where you want to start. And I like the fact that she had more children, who were also witches/wizards. It's good to know the Hermione legacy lives on in someone, regardless of the fact their in Hufflepuff.
Hm, I'm curious. If Jaiden had gone to Hogwarts, would she have been in Slytherin? Please inform me or I'll be up all night.
Anyway, good start. Update soon.
| bunny08 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
is not bad at all...i just wish it was longer lol good job!
| you go girl chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
this is cute :)