Reviews for If You Can't Stand the Heat
HeagyBaby chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
hahah this was great. I loved the ending.
Sora919 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
That was sexy and funny. Great one-shot!
Solar Guardian chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Hehehe, that was a nice little short story, keep up the good work. :)
wilsontoyourhouse chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
Pfft. The ending made me giggle.

This was like a picker upper after reading awful angst...favoriting!

~MuSiC HaTs~
MONST3R chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
LOL the ending is hilarious!

& very super sexy.
elias chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Nice story!
Celebrianna1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
lol That was sexy, sweet and funny. Fantastic job.
Remuko chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
This was hilarious and beautiful!

Good job moonjump05! I still need to read Takagou's but it's not looking good for her atm! This fic is AMAZING xD

You had the perfect blend of humour, sexiness, and fluff. A
Takagou chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
You are so going to win! great job!
Inuyatta chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
That was hysterical! Well done!
Sweet Kagamine Kiss chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
This does have a scent of lemon to it (as well as bacon...), yet it's really funny at the end... Naru-kun lost his eyebrows. P
uiWEFNOIGERAUO12446 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
loved it but it should be rated m... lol his eyebrows were gone
TheNarator chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Very well written and very hot. Literally, lol. Its really sweet and the last bit is funny. You have a real talent. I really liked it.

You should write a second chapter from Hinata's POV!
SilentSinger948 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Awesome, sexy, and hilarious.

Excellent job.
xDattebayo chapter 1 . 5/6/2009


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