Reviews for The New Bella
Motherof8 chapter 7 . 10/2/2014
Wow, enjoying this feisty bella
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 10/2/2014
Can’t believe he would leave
Motherof8 chapter 5 . 10/2/2014
Poor bella
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 10/2/2014
Can't wait
Motherof8 chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
Dumb idea
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Sounds interesting
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Not to be mean, but did you ever read Twilight ? Vampires can't cry or bleed, their INHUMAN as in NOT human
Anonymous chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
If Alice doesn't have a power than she wouldn't be a vampire, she became one because she went to a mental hospital for seeing visions & that's where James found her
Fee-Sha16 chapter 17 . 9/18/2010
cool story! good job!)
Sophie.Westwood chapter 17 . 1/30/2010
LOVE the ending :)
Sophie.Westwood chapter 15 . 1/29/2010
Sophie.Westwood chapter 9 . 1/29/2010
Sophie.Westwood chapter 3 . 1/29/2010
HAHAHA oh mi gosh! the cullens gonna die when they se bella! hahahaa :D
AussiePiper1992 chapter 4 . 12/12/2009
hahaha the cola coven! love it lmao
MisaMisaLand chapter 17 . 8/27/2009
I really don't want to be a bad reviewer, but although I thought this story had a great plot line, alot of the time the characteristic were very human, such as the fact that Bella wouldn't be bloody from being beaten up-because she has no blood- and a few other things. also as a side note; try not to switch POVs as often, it guess a tad confusing.

God this makes me sound really mean, I hope this didn't come across too harsh and I want you to know that with i little more thought, your sotries could turn out great.

Sill, Well done

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