Reviews for As the Darkness aproach
Femalefan chapter 13 . 10/8
Your spelling and grammar are ok except that you keep misspelling Flitwick's name. It's Filius not Felius and Crabbe not Grabbe. Might I suggest you get a beta?
LadyFreak chapter 15 . 9/19
I really like where this was going and how you were building it up. Sorry to see it discontinued. i will still follow to see if you or someone else will pick it up some day :)
AppleBananaOranges chapter 9 . 9/13
Hooray to Harry for finally standing up to that greasy bastard. He deserved it, that hypocrite. What about the time when he actually showed respect for you and all you did was keep insulting him?

I mean, I usually do like Snape so I refrain from calling him names, but here I really don't think anything can justify his actions. *shrugs*
AppleBananaOranges chapter 8 . 9/13
Don't worry Sniv- Severus, I'm sure the feeling is mutual :) (I don't care what he does: goes dark, joins Voldemort, w.e, I just want to see the look on everyone's faces when they realize just how ignorant they are. I really hope he gets some retribution, and I'd like to see how Lily would react if she saw how her childhood friend bullying her son like this. I think the canon Snape wasn't so bad in comparision, because in this story he is the main influence on Harry and his own Head of House. Slytherin is meant to stick together even when they're isolated from the rest of the house, but instead Snape is shunning one of his own. He should honestly be fired. And Dumbledore is just... there. Doing practically nothing. I already banged my head on the desk a few times. I want to slap Snape so hard, but I doubt that'll knock any sense into him, with the way he's acting.)

Your story is really intriguing though, even though I feel like a masochist for continuing it. It's too bad you're discontinuing. I think the emotion build-up would make the end a lot more satisfying (or tragic, depending). It definitely got some emotions out of me. Is it strange I sense a dark undertone? Probably just me. Anyways, I'll applaud~
Vivianne95 chapter 15 . 6/19
Really interesting!
Will you give us a summary of the year from Potter's POV again? I'd like so!
More Please!
teedub chapter 15 . 9/17/2013
this is the snape i've always imagined in canon, nothing but a hateful, bitter, neglectful man-child. it's too bad you quit the story, you've laid an excellent foundation for either an brutal/vengeful or disinterested harry. I can easily see him turning into snape himself.
WeirdCornChip chapter 15 . 6/25/2013
Please continue this. It iS an amazing story
Mari Wollsch chapter 15 . 4/14/2013
will you continua? xxxx
Phoenix avis chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
I usually do not read unfinished stories that have not been updated in some time, but I am happy I decided to make an exception for this one.

If you are still reading reviews, I hope you decide to take it up again, I'm going to mark it as "follow" just in case..., it really is quite interesting.
Unknownmusic chapter 15 . 1/7/2013
Yes. Keep going down this road Harry :)
Unknownmusic chapter 11 . 1/7/2013
Love it :)
Kairan1979 chapter 15 . 11/5/2012
I hope Harry will avenge Gryffindors for forcing him to help them. Maybe adopting one of the Weasley Twins pranks so nobody will think he did it.
Venus914 chapter 15 . 10/19/2012
Harry seems to get the raw end of a deal. If im Harry and i find myself at a wandpoint with Gryffindors, id just let them. They're school kids. They cant cast dangerous spells. Id just let Ginny die.

I hate that they ignore him and expect him to save them. And you, when can we expect a little fairness in your story? I hate them all. When can Harry torture them instead?

I hope he will kill Voldemort and rule all over them. I would like everyone punished.
Sivy chapter 15 . 5/29/2012
hey, great fic, this is a turn i haven't seen yet, the way you right it makes it unique. I hope to read more although I am aware it hasn't been updated in a long time.
I'S Watcher chapter 15 . 1/5/2012
I know this is probably pointless since you haven't updated this story for three years or something, but I really hope you do update it! It's a great story, and I love the way that it is from Snape's perspective.


Okay fine I'm going to beg, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS :P
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