Reviews for A super Smash Moment
thaFanned chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
this was the most awesome funniest thing i have ever read
AngieROX111 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
lol, I think Olimar is REALLY the worst character... i have played pikmin, ugh... worst game ever! And could you make one with the main character being r.o.b. ?


-Link's 'mute policy'

-Olimar not deserving a theme,

-Crazy Hand being all hill-billy like.


-you only have three super smash moments! WRITE MORE!
Smash King24 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
It was creative and funny. The thing that would make it perfect would be adding zombies to the story. lol

Things I liked:

-Link's mute contract. So true.

-Crazy Hands accent. I never saw that before.

-Referring to FLUDD as Mario's "hydro-pump thing".

-The bake sale idea was funny too.

Things I disliked:

-You making fun of Olimar. Obviously you've never played Pikmin before.

-It was too quick in the beginning, too many ideas in such few sentences.

My rating:


Its okay for a comedy.
Liv-the-WaddleDee chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Poor Master hand... the "mute contract" was funny, and I agree that no one likes Olimar.