| Reviews for More Important Things |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 10/23 Well that sucks! |
 wandamarie chapter 12 . 10/25 thank you for the story |
| wandamarie chapter 11 . 10/25 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 10 . 10/25 wow |
| wandamarie chapter 9 . 10/25 oh my goodness getting good thanks |
| wandamarie chapter 8 . 10/25 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 7 . 10/25 keep up the good work |
| wandamarie chapter 6 . 10/25 wow |
| wandamarie chapter 5 . 10/25 wow thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 4 . 10/25 wow getting good thanks |
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 10/25 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 10/25 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 10/25 thank you for the story so far |
| buttons1721 chapter 12 . 10/12 This ending was beautiful and perfect! |
| Dumbles Basher chapter 3 . 9/26 Do you not know the difference between the plural and the possessive? Learning how to use an apostrophe would immeasurably improve your writing. Love to see Dumbles get what he deserves, but your poor grammar detracts from your storytelling. Also, lose is different from loose. Once is a mis-type; repeated misuse means you either are ignorant of the difference or you just do not care. |