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Siriusmunchkin chapter 12 . 11/25
Another story that is not only true fanfiction, but a totally awesome story. Definitely my kind of story
Busymom75 chapter 1 . 11/13
I think you are right in saying that both Harry and Hermione are mature for their ages, but I also think that there are reasons for that which many others will not realise.
Firstly, Harry was raised by the Dursley's. He was made to do chores (gardening, cleaning, cooking, etc) from a very early age, so in that respect, he has a lot more maturity than another child of the same age (Draco Malfoy, Ronald Weasley). In addition to that, he has been beaten and abused by his relatives for the majority of his short life. He could have chosen to behave in the same manner as them, or to show that he is the better person by not reacting to their treatment of him.
Hermione is an only child, and both of her parents work in the very resectful career of their choice, dentistry. As a result of this, and the loneliness that she has been through due to having so few friends prior to attending Hogwarts, Hermione chose to find something that she enjoyed doing - reading, which has encouraged her to learn more, and faster, than other children her age. She is intelligent, curious, and eager to learn as much as she can so that she can prove herself in a new and unfamiliar world.
For both of them, they want to learn and experience as much as they can, but they still want to be the young people that they are. Yes, they are likely to make some mistakes along the way, (who doesn't), but they are willing to ask for help and advice from some people who are likely to listen to them.
WeisseHex chapter 4 . 10/10
Now I know They won't go back to Hogwarts if Snape is Depute there! What a serious mistake, Albus!
allisonwellingtonbrown chapter 11 . 9/21
i never considered a ghostly Ginny that is hilarious I love it. Poor Harry will never be able to bathe in Hogwarts bahaha
Finnspa23 chapter 12 . 8/21
Enjoyed this!
adafrog chapter 12 . 7/4
Very good, thanks.
WhyTK chapter 12 . 6/23
Please keep writing Harmony stories. I love them.

Chapters 2 and 3 of "Flotsam and Jetsam" by Wonderbee31 are two chapters of the Harmony story "Scar Head." Please adopt it and finish it.

Chapter 1 of "Flotsam and Jetsam" is the beginning of an HP The Munsters crossover. It was completed by Clell65619 under the title "Dodgers, Dresses, Teddy Bears and Spot," a great story.
maiqsmail chapter 10 . 5/29
Bruh. It was mediocre so far, the "so kinda bad, it's guilty pleasure" but it went even worse in this chapter. I'm from Russia so I'm somewhat familiar with emotional propaganda and revolution rhetoric, so the overdose on that here was quite unwelcome.
I could put few kicks into their recruiting practices with Lupin saying "dumbles said" as his reason for abandoning Harry to Dursleys, and then he almost immediately got hired as "independent" when his reasons clearly showed he was Dumby pocket man, but I won't begrudge that. Dumbdumb apparently had a change of character and became "good"at that moment and Lupin was hired because of that, despite the fact that these changes could not be communicated in-universe.

Ehh, drop. Kinda 5/10, no strong feelings for the story but I've seen worse as well.
maiqsmail chapter 6 . 5/29
Down, down, down the drain the godfather went. Oh, well, happens.
maiqsmail chapter 3 . 5/29
It's not "passed", it's "past". Again and again, ugh.
maiqsmail chapter 1 . 5/29
Very rushed pairing, they dived into the relationship with zero hesitation and flew through first bunch of steps. Also, they're 12... Prepuberty, anyone?
And, sorry, but dialogue formatting is atrocious.
1. People speak differently, but your characters all have the same manner of speech.
2. A LOT of sentences starts with the same "(Name), ...".
3. A LOT of commas are missing! Makes for a very bumpy read.
erstwhile-S chapter 11 . 5/23
Enjoyed reading this again. Thanks!
Darknessdawns chapter 12 . 4/11
This is an absolutely wonderful story that I've had the pleasure to read several times. I'm honestly not sure how many at this point, but I enjoy it every time. I think this is also the only story I've ever read where Sirius and Hagrid are lost like this. It was sad, but really showcased how corrupt and evil the British Ministry was in this.
kiwihipp chapter 12 . 3/11
What a different story yet again! I liked how Draco became part of their group after realising he was going down the wrong path. A very stable Harry in this story.
hdres chapter 12 . 2/12
An interesting and well written story. Thank you
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