|Reviews for License and Registration|
| WhoKnew24 chapter 4 . 1/10/2010
Wow. For some reason, when Bella said Edward would go running for the hills after he found out about her past, I guessed she had been raped or abused but I did not see her having a daughter.
It's sad what she went through but I'm glad she's moved on and loves Renesmee. I hope she likes Edward.
Loved the ending:
“Yeah, I mean if its ok with you? Hopefully I can get her to like me so she can be on my side and convince you to go out with me again.” He said with a smile.
I smacked his chest as we walked back towards his car.
“Edward Cullen, you would really turn a daughter on her mother just for a date?” I teased.
“Hell yes I would! Especially when you’re the mom.” He replied.
| WhoKnew24 chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
Aw. I love that Edward wants everything to be perfect for Bella even to the point of asking Alice for help. I hope they have a great first date.
I can’t just pounce on her every time I see her.
Maybe she’ll pounce on me?
“Such a sweet boy… Trying to suck up to me for future laws you plan to break?” She asked teasingly.
“Of course. I thought I would butter you up so when I decided to rob the bank in town you’d just look the other way.”
On to the next chapter.
| WhoKnew24 chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
These parts made me laugh:
I know that coffee doesn’t taste as good as my cock .
The coffee that was once in my mouth was now all over my windshield and I was chocking on my burnt tongue.
Now Bella I know for a fact that you don’t spit. :)
(Edward's so bad)
"Will you have dinner with me tonight?"
Is he high again?
“Tell me what you want Bella.” He said breathlessly.
I want a double cheeseburger with a large fry and a Dr. Pepper…HELLO!
“You…I want you to make me cum with your mouth.” I replied.
It was sweet of him to ask her out. Wonder what he has planned. :)
| WhoKnew24 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Wow, that was pretty hot. ;) I'm guessing Bella's squad car doesn't have a camera or maybe it's one you have to flip on to start recording?
I love that they both liked each other in high school but were too afraid to approach one another.
Can't wait to see where you're taking these two. Great job.
| rohan65 chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
these two are so horny they forgot they could have been busted by the viewing public. i hope it's not charlie that will bail them out of the car and that they have their cell phones with them to call somebody for help. he he.
| babybaby15 chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
I loved it
| Mjb44 chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
Maybe Alice will get them out!
| luv4edwardcullen chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
| cullengirl08 chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
Yeah, I was wondering about that little fact myself. Either way, though, at least they were having a good time. And it's obvious that they are starting to really like each other. I can't wait to see how things continue.
| bakerusaf chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
| brittany86 chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
| Heather1970 chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
Too funny. I was thinking how are they are going to get out when they started and then at the end it was what I thought. I loved this chapter. Can't wait to read more.
| ellaryne chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
lmao! i bet it will be charlie
| immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
LMAO! OMG too fucking funny LOL.
| babybaby15 chapter 9 . 1/6/2010
I love your story a lot so far! When will the next chapter be up?