Reviews for Our Little Doll
um hi chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
what the fuck
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
So it was all just a nightmare?! Woooooow...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
Does anyone know where this author went? They're extremely talented I want to read more of their stuff! Please say something if anyone knows the whereabouts of this author!
Other Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
I know this is an older story and if you get notifications you're probably wondering "who the hell is reading this eight years?!" or even "who the hell is gonna take the TIME fo REVIEW it eight years later?!"

Anyway, let me tell you just how brilliant of a writer I think you are. As a CSA survivor, I can relate to everything Coraline, a character I've always been able to relate to, is going through. I felt every emotion in this fanfiction; the fear, disgust, the agony, despair, anxiety, and much more. You clearly knew what you were doing. I don't see many fanfics take on this issue without some degree of... immaturity. When rape occurs in a fanfic, its usually written unrealistically to make a character look like an asshole (usually a character that got "in the way" of someone's OTP) or its fetishized or its just flat out shittily written. I appluad you for not doing these things.

I'm also pleased that someone wrote a fic like this involving this movie. "Coraline" isn't just a giant metaphor for abusive and toxic parents, but for child predators as well. The movie involves a child who's family moves into a house that isn't supposed to be sold to family with children, much like in real life where your not supposed to sell a house to a family with kids due to a pedophile living near by or vice versa. Coraline is a child who is often neglected by her parents and often feels sad, lonely, and bored from it; things pedophiles look for in their victims so they can easily manipulate them. Of course, she then lured in by this adult figure who seems to fill all of her needs, and like a lot of predators, she conveniently shares all of her interests and does all these things to impress her. Of course, its all a facade to try to get the child to enroll in more... devious activities. When these activities are rejected, the Beldam tries more coaxing through reassurance and baiting. When that fails, the attempted guilt tripping ensues. When that also fails, things get more threatening and violent, and like a child to their abuser, Coraline finally sees the Beldam's true colors. Then, she has to use brainpower and wit to outfox her physically overpowering predator. Not to mention, the Beldam has preyed on and eaten many other children. She is literal child predator.

The point is, I don't see anyone explore this theme in Coraline, so I'd be lying if I hadn't felt a twinge of excitement reading this as I saw you paint the Beldam as a rapist. Again, bravo!

That being said, everyone was portrayed well in character. Charlie was as uninterested and uninvolved as we typically see him as. Mel was just as accusatory and unreasonable as we know her to be. Coraline was her typical sassy and moody self. Wybie was... well... Wybie!

I would say more, but I fear I'm running out of time! I just want you to know this is incredible and I hope you've done or will do more Coraline related work in the future! I give this disturbing story an 10/10!

One question though, was the whole fic a dream to Coraline? What was up with the Cat? It was a little confusing.

Anyway, great work!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
OH MY GOSH THE ENDING WAS AMAZING! THE FREAKING CAT! AHHH!
Smiley chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
Wow... as twisted and dark as it was, it was a really good fanfic but seriously why the fuck didn't Coraline's mother comfort her?! I mean for god's sake an eleven year old girl can't put holes in her private parts like! I honestly wanted to punch Mel in the face! Ah! Anyway good story I feel sorry for Coraline :(
Louche chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
Wow, uh, this writer is messed up in the head. Some parts felt way too real...

Good story, though.

Shame she/he was afraid to write any more...
Richard Smith chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
what...the...fuck...was...that...i...just...read?...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
and then mel came in and beat the other mothers ass and confort coraline crying so hard im sorry coraline i shoud've believe you said mel thats okay coraline said crying
TV Tropes User chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
It was disturbing, I'll say that much. Of course I've been raped so you know...

The thing that bothered me was the mother's behavior... Um, your daughter was raped and you're going off on her like that? Seriously? And the dad doesn't do anything? Seriously. I think realistically some legal action would have gone through, like investigating the parents and all that... But it was an interesting story, I'll say that much.

PS I don't think Romance should be a genre for this. I would say drama or tragedy in addition to horror. The romance was out of place.
EHCA chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
It was creepy and sad but this was the best Coraline fanfic I ever read, and the ending was like WOW.
Great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
PLEASE add another chapter ( with more Other Mother/ Coraline). I really enjoyed it.

Also, why did you write all in bold?
AbandonedAccount123 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
...This was- incredible, and not in a good way.
Megan chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I'm pissed at Coralines mom, I mean I get that she doesn't think it's possible that theres another mother, but if I was Mel I would have believed that she was raped but just thought she was tramitized, in stead of disbiliving her, and I'm counfused at the end Is she dead, that would explain why she doesn't hurt, but than why would the cat be there.
Woodswolf chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
I'm not exactly sure what to say for this.

First off... this was really good and really realistic. I found this fic on TV Tropes actually. This was really creepy and well-written and realistic-for-canon.

Well done.

Again, very creepy. Can't say that enough.
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