Reviews for The City Spins
XOXOJordan chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
i love this story.
JelliBeen chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
That was just beyond amazing!

Before she knew it she was smiling against his lips and he was laughing as he picked her up again, whispering "Because, because, because," against her lips over and over.

That part just killed me. It's amazing how one simple word just means so much for these two.

And when she woke up in the middle of the night.

This was just crazy amazing and snap!
ihatetosayitoldyouso chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
ohh...this is so sad, poor jenny...i loved it though! awesome fanfic btw!