Reviews for Bitter Leaves and Blossoms Bright
Kathryn Shadow chapter 36 . 4/26/2011
OMG UPDATING. HI. HI THERE. HI. SORRY I DIDN'T READ THIS FOR A BIT. THINGS HAPPENED. BUT HERE I AM AND OOH THE SHINY

-squishes you and the fic and the originalfic-

(I'm not hyper. I'm just... kind of... overcaffeinated and... Okay, yes, I'm hyper.)

THE FIC!LOVE: YOU HAVE IT.
macus chapter 36 . 4/26/2011
OMG FINALLY

took you long enough

PLEASE write more! These chapters are amazing!
FloatOn chapter 36 . 4/26/2011
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But in all seriousness I'm very glad that you went ahead an developed your own story/world. I very much would look forward to reading your original fiction. Though please remember your fanbase.
InkiBlinkiPinki chapter 36 . 4/26/2011
Omg, your A/N made me crack up ) Yes, the assassins sound very much like a cult... But unlike normal cults that are creepy, the assassins are a sexy cult... A sexy, sneaky, murderous cult lol Emphasis on sexy though! Anyway, I praise your being alive and *hopefully* in good health! And as always I'm SUPER grateful that you continue your fantastic story. I feel so bad for Isra b/c of how helpless she feels. Angst is good though lol Looking forward to your next update )
Noor chapter 36 . 4/26/2011
An update? What a wonderful surprise, and worth the wait.

I thought the dialogue was very snappy in this chapter, and watched with interest as Isra's judgment continued to be clouded since the death of Sarai. It made sense. You don't get over things like that in a day.

I found myself agreeing with Malik's advice to let the crazy idea go, and was glad that something got through to Isra, and she agreed.

Assassins: secret cult, or hardcore knitting circle?
Shebs chapter 36 . 4/26/2011
More awesomeness from you! Yay!

This original story of yours sounds promising, but I really hope you won't abandon Isra for it. This work is too good to be left behind.
Sarkule chapter 36 . 4/26/2011
This story is awesome!

Also, I love your footnotes :
Mercsenary chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
:D

Weeee!
papertowel1567 chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
This is seriously one of the best stories I've read in a while.

And it is for sure the best researched story I've ever read!

I love it!111 :D
Sivan IXXX chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
I love how you just assimilate your story into the game's plot so well it's like this should have been what happened in the game! Isra sounds so much like a real person and reminds me of myself in some ways (aside from the whole seductress thing.)
ellfie chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
Oh yes, so much angst! i love how you summarized it haha. But, fortunately, it was still well done so it didn't feel so over the top (as in, to the point where you want to consider shooting all the characters and yourself just so they can all get over it!) Nah, it was just enough here. Plus I like how... I dunno, twitchy, you made Isra this and the past chapter. Nervous, less level-headed than normal. It gave another interesting insight into her, and was a good and real reaction to how things are going in her life right now.

I'd love to see more between her and Malik, or at the very least more reference to the whole "one-night-lovers" thing. We don't get to see a lot of how that affected either of them, until really this chapter, but you could do more. Then again, you may not want to do more for other plot purposes... but whatever, just my input :)

ALso, I actually think that originally the whole cutting the finger off wasn't a part of Ubi-Assassin's "cult". That was, at the beginning I think, just Altair. I remember watching early early interviews where they mentioned him loosing it on a mission. But I think fans read into it so much they made it a part of the whole culture.

Either way though, it is quite cultish.

Good luck with your story :D Gotta love elves.

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Isis the Sphinx chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
OMG! You do live! Woooo!

*gives the rest of the living main characters a hug* They need one.

Looking forward to more. Keep writing!
HikariNoTenshi-San chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
Oi, oi. So much angst in this chapter...What's the coupling, if there is one? Cuz I can't tell. UPDATE!
daniero chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
Yay welcome back! I was so thrilled when I was notified of a new chapter :O

I'll wait as long as necessary for more! :D
Donroth chapter 36 . 4/25/2011
Thanks for the great update! I'm so shipping Malik/Isra right now. I hope they get whoever killed Sarai. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. :)
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