|Reviews for The Lesser King|
| Temera Miller chapter 2 . 8/16/2016
This is strangely beguiling, is there more?
| Bronkwin2 chapter 2 . 8/19/2015
| SneakyMe chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
This thing seems so.. Interesting huh? You really gave a twist on their bond especially when you let Peter and Lucy done that quite 'incestous' moment.. (sorry for the word) :)
I really like this one.. thus im looking forward to your nxt update.. Please post it sooner? :) Thanks anyway.. :)
| Loving Peter Lucy chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
I . cant. even. ...
I just clicked on this to find some story i could manage to use, and yet.. i didnt expect to see something .. Enjoyable like it is! I love Peter and Lucy! The moment i have watched the LWW and Prince Caspian, i already found those pair quite interesting! Hmm.. If i may know, they are William Moseley and Georgie Henley right?! Oh gosh! You really done a WONDERFUL plot! Can u please continue it!? i love to see this... 3
| MagnificientlyValiant chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
Like seriously?! This is...
ITS SO AMAZING! You really done a PERFECT story about the two of my favorite characters! I admit i am new into this fandom. And i only watched the movie though. Gosh! Can you please go for a new chapter?! please?! Id like to see what will goinh to happen between the Pevensie!
| rainbow raw chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Hi. I'm very interested in making a "trailer" video for this fic. Would you like it/approve it? (I'd credit you and link the fic, of course)
Check my youtube channel so you can see my videos. My channel is "boholife".
| jack chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
When is the next update?
| Gracey chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
WOW... i didnt expect that to happen... keep writing! i want to know what happens next!
| Dulset chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
I was having a kind of craving for Edmund/Lucy and Peter/Lucy fics and I came across this. I think yours is the only decent 'M' rated fic in this pairing. Your story is pretty interesting. Are you going to update soon? Please do, I definitely want to read it.
| Starbrow chapter 2 . 12/14/2011
Like whoooooahhh! Amazing chapter, hot and sweet and funny and sad all at once. Peter/Lucy is divine and you write them beautifully - the perspective from Edmund is a brilliant touch. I truly hope the next update is in the works and will be posted sometime before 2013 ;-).
| Ikillatfirstsight chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
please update soon!
.. though i have to say... i couldn't help but laugh at dear Edmund's remark XD
| MissVenusVixen chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
Ok well written, but I still want Susan there.
| Lucyole chapter 2 . 9/3/2011
wow that story is really exciting and good i like it
man i want to know what happend aloso why it happend what
peter had thougt abotu it and where susan is please write furhter on that storyi it is really amazing
| flyonthewall18 chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Aww! it such a cute story in incest haha! like this one... _
Please post the next chapter...
| J.M. Legault chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
Spy Master Edmund Indeed.
Well done hopefully I won't have to wait 2 years for chapter 3 ;. I've always preferred Peter/Lucy and Susan/Edmund (if thats the route this going) anyways.