Reviews for Ash: The Last Stand xBeginningsx
ShipQueenCandy chapter 11 . 6/17/2017
Oh my god. This fanfic was amazing, I'm literally crying that it ended. You write so well, and this was amazingly well written, and the plot was just awesome, along with the super cool fluffy moments. I encourage you to write more, this was phenominal. Thanks for the entertainment :)

-caandyy
Holly M chapter 4 . 8/12/2015
Steelix is a steel type not a rock type. Buizel is not very effective against steelix.
Holly M chapter 4 . 8/12/2015
Gary is TOTALLY better than Paul.
Xxx chapter 3 . 6/6/2015
I wonder if you can make a aaml in highschool
Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2015
Im lovin this
Guest chapter 11 . 1/16/2015
simply superb story. best for a pok e fan.
dloold87 chapter 5 . 8/15/2014
what is sad, is I can actually see Gary being gay. Tracy I figured for gay from day 1.
dloold87 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
I love it, how have I never thought of naming a ghost pokemon Scooby Doo I will never know. well time to go catch a ghastly and name it.
The almighty swede chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Both Ash:The last stand fics are really really good but this is definitelt my favourite! AAML 4eva
Codie - King of Hollows chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
Okay first off Ash's actual Cyndaquil that he caught in Jhoto is Male and it evolved before the Sinnoh League so the ONLY possible explanation as to why he has a female Xyndaquil, now Quilava, in this chapter is that his Jhoto caught Quilava bred and he got the Egg or someone just randomly gave him a Cyndaquil Egg that hatched into a female. Everything so far is accurate except that if you're claiming that the Cyndaquil, now Quilava, that Ash has in this chapter is the one he caught in Jhoto.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/14/2013
Great! Now for arc two!
Evy chapter 10 . 12/7/2012
OMG! I laughed, I cried, I fell from my chair and scared my pet ... Really good job! I will surely read your next arc ... but this time I might consider doing it sitting on the carpet ... thanks for uploading your fic!
Guardian54 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I know that since this is after the fic's completed it's way behind the times but I believe Ash's crew should contain a Togekiss and his old Meganium, plus Infernape and Feraligator, the Grass and Water ones can tank and Infernape/Togekiss can use sheer speed to dodge anything thrown at them.

Would have liked a Gardevoir in there but whatever.
song for you chapter 8 . 5/15/2011
Cried tears of joy as if this really happened and an inner me screamed "finally" for about an hour lmfao
saveme57 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
the nickname for gastly really bugs me im not sure why but i just done like it
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