Reviews for Unspoken Affection
3.14159265358979 chapter 5 . 4/5/2013
Sequel pleeeeeaaaasssseeeer! And it was very kawaiiiiii
AznMistress chapter 5 . 7/14/2010
Hehe i'd like it if there would b a sequel. hehe.

this was very short, but very sweet.
AznMistress chapter 4 . 7/14/2010
AznMistress chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
Wa! Adorable!..btw; you dont use ur OC's name alot. in the future *since this is completed* i think it would b easier 2 follow if you use the OC's name more often. GO AYAME!
AznMistress chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
...did you mention the OC's name? I feel bad 4 her...
AznMistress chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Chichi.Cherry chapter 5 . 6/16/2009

Why would Tezuka let Fuji off because he wants to -date- someone?


Why would Fuji let Ayame kick him? -He's- supposed to be the sadist. \

Choppy grammar but it was an ok ending, I guess.
Chichi.Cherry chapter 4 . 6/16/2009
Well... I was hoping that the story would progress slower, but that's ok.

I hope he doesn't kiss her right after she ate a burger. Onion-breath, oh noes!
Chichi.Cherry chapter 3 . 6/16/2009

So anticlimactic. T.T
Chichi.Cherry chapter 2 . 6/16/2009
Short and sweet.

Haha Fuji is being unsmart, but either way, I absolutely -adore- this kind of plot! I love it when people don't think that the other person likes them. It makes it so bittersweet and it's always so awesome how things work out at the end.

'sigh' I'm so happy. xD
Chichi.Cherry chapter 1 . 6/16/2009

Nice dramatic ending right there. All decked out in bold and italics, too.

I like. D
Lady Monozuki chapter 5 . 6/9/2009
I promised I would review your story, I'm sorry for not getting to it until now.

Anyway, I'm not typically a fan of OCs, but this story wasn't too bad in my opinion. The ending was really funny and cute in its own way. :) I like random endings so that was good.

There were a few things that you could improve on, like your punctuation and tenses. Punctuation is a little bit harder to work on, because sometimes it's not obvious. However, tenses are important to your story. ;)

Overall, it was nice for your first attempt at fanfiction. You have talent, you just need to polish it so you can shine. :) Feel free to PM me if you have questions or want more detailed feedback.
CLasp.ToMe chapter 5 . 5/19/2009
Omg? He read her mind right? Or his he just smart like that...? That's creepy eitehr way! NEED to make a sequal! Omg, please!
waterlily0777 chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
*starts chanting* sequel, sequel, sequel! LOL but yeah... please make a sequel!
no longer writing fan fiction1 chapter 5 . 5/16/2009
Aw very cuteĀ”
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