Reviews for Two Become One
kobez2.0 chapter 6 . 9/4/2009
Very good update, there were a few spelling errors and I had to re read a few sentences to figure out what you were trying to say, but on the whole it was very good. I can't wait for more.

-Kobez-
kobez2.0 chapter 5 . 9/3/2009
I think the last scene was particualrly strong, and a good example of why I subscribed the the story in the first place. I felt like the Battle scenes were a little harried and didn't quite flow just right. But on the whole, excellent update. I hope I don't have so long to wait for the next.

Peace.

-Kobez-
kobez2.0 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
The transitions from Pixy's POV to the journalists POV is undefined and a little rough. But you've done an excellent job displaying the revrence towards Cipher, I can't wait until you update this.

-kobez-