Reviews for Harry Potter and What Could Have Been
tricorvus chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
Well, well, well, this is promising. And I CAN believe that a Dork Lard just hanging on would appoint a task to a 11 year old. After all, who'd suspect him? And in canon, Dorky DID entrust a 16 year old Draco. It's not that much of a stretch :D
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Um so in this one the Weasleys are Dark? I'm ok with that. I can open my mind if it's a good story. You've made a good start. After all, the Weasleys are purebloods. It could happen. I noticed that you spelled Lilly with 3 ls, and at this point frankly, I no longer care how her name is spelled. My husband's perfectionism is sliding off me finally. :D
Rock on
The Red Dementor chapter 11 . 3/12/2013
Woot, can't wait for the next chapter, even if they're a bit short
Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 3/24/2010
McGonagall is so incredibly oblivious.
Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 3/24/2010
Well done!
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 3/24/2010
Good stuff!
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 3/24/2010
Good chapter. Interesting and creative idea for a story.
Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 3/24/2010
A guilty conscience flees when no one pursues.
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 3/24/2010
Figure it out, Hermione.
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Very different story.
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 3/18/2010
Most interesting.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 3/18/2010
Oh no! I certainly hope that Bumbles isn't that much a fool. Oh wait I am talking about Dumbles here I forgot.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
The Weasleys were Dark? What a fascinating idea for a story!
Rori Potter chapter 11 . 6/23/2009
That was great. Update soon.
wsredtrftghjkl chapter 11 . 5/31/2009
That is some pretty good writting there. You have taken J.K. Rowling's plots and ran with them haven't you. Lol. I liked it how everything foacused around the book. I defo think you should carry it on to go thought COS, POA, GOF, OOTP, HBP and DH as Ron as a Slytherin and how it affects his life. Tht would be totally awesome. You have some talent btw.
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