Reviews for Fighting the Invisible Foe
ishotsherlock chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Loved it , loved it ,loved it.

AKE:D
DarkArts27 chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Aw I loved it! I really liked how you used first person, it sounds exactly like Booth would have been feeling, you captured his emotions and responses perfectly :)

Looking forward to more of your stuff :)

Taylor.
crazycamera chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
I thought thsi was very good!
NiennaTru chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
What an absolutley wonderful "missing scenes/POV" fic! I especially loved how you incorporated your take on Booth's reaction (the anxiety and panic) into the anxious Booth relaxing and smiling when he saw Brennan scene at the end of this episode. Well done. I'm definitely adding this to my favs. Thanks for taking the time to write.

NiennaTru
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Hi there,

Have not seen this epi yet...will watch it tonight but I am sitting here with a lump in my throat...you have caught Booth and how he is feeling so so well...

'My hand finds hers, tugging on it like Parker does to mine when he wants my attention. It seems to work for grown up Booth’s too, because she’s stopped and is looking at me now'...

Love how he tells her he does not know what this means and how he wants to run when he finds out...it is lovely how she calms him when he loses it...

'I’m in love with her. Completely, utterly, ass over teakettle in love with her'...

Loved...

'This time, it’s her on the outside, wanting to fight what she can’t touch'...

And how he realises...

'To her, I matter. And I need that'...

I am in tears now...what a lovely ending...can not wait for this epi now...

Ger
TheLifeILive chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
That was absolutely amazing!

You described Booth's feelings and thoughts perfectly.

Fantastic job!

Leah
CSIMiamiNYBonesCMRBFan22 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
that was an awesome story! I just about cried watching this episode as funny as some of it was the ending just made me want to cry
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I loved that! It was really swet and nice. (:

Angelica
jacklynvt11 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
That was beautifully written. Loved it. That episode was amazing. I thought it was nicely done. Great job with the one shot. :)
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
that was good loved it
dreamcatchme14 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
"I’m in love with her. Completely, utterly, ass over teakettle in love with her."

In all of the Bones FanFiction I've read - which is quite a bit- this is probably the single most perfect line I've ever read. It's so perfectly Booth, and how he realizes he's in love with Bones.

LOVED your story. Loved the episode, too. And I thought Hero in the Hold was emotional...dang..
blc chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
You've captured exactly what I would have loved to see, and that Booth's only now acknowledging to himself that he's in love, and not just that he loves her. Wonderful.
retrospectoscope chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
WOW WOW WOW

i LOVE your take on why he asked her to come into the operation

i hadnt even thought of that

i got goosebumps and started tear-ing up all over again

well done you

i have a feeling its one of those eps thats going to stay with you a while... even though i know its going to be ok in the end. this week will be torture!
fishyfin1 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Really well written, love the added scene. Explains Booth's point of view quite well.

'Plus, it’s hard to fake my death to her again with her standing right there.'

i laughed out loud at that line ... a little bones humor in the dark plot - well done!
ab89us chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I havent seen this episode yet but I couldnt help but read this. _ I'm hopelessly addicted to FF and Bones! Great one shot.

*Alyssa
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