Reviews for Pretend
anna.wyman.7 chapter 11 . 2/16
i loved it but u should put tommy in the story :(
Guest chapter 11 . 5/21/2013
u could hav ended it better than this lik the kiss again when they came to know the truth
LillieGhoul chapter 11 . 11/29/2011
oh wow, weird ending to a weird story... :P BUT I SO TOTALLY LOVED IT! :D
LillieGhoul chapter 9 . 11/29/2011
too-short-chapter alert!
LillieGhoul chapter 8 . 11/29/2011
bit long? r u kidding me? it was hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing!
LillieGhoul chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
love the randomness XD
LillieGhoul chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
It's PieMAN not the pie movie!
Hidden and STDSD in our Flames chapter 7 . 8/25/2011
Oh wow! OH KAZEY-MON

Kazemon: don't call me that! I'm Kazemon not Kazey-mon or whatever you said.

Me : yea hold on

Kazemon: * fumes *

Me: OH BEEZY-MON

Beetlemon: DON'T CALL ME THAT.

Me : whatever I'm not gonna aruge with you guys about names. This is more important.

Kazemon and Beetlemon : * looks at fanfiction *

Beetlemon : JP!

Kazemon : IZUMI!

Me: it's freaking Zoe. You know ... that's why they call her ... oh I don't know Z not I! !

Kazemon : why would she worry over that? ?

Me: oh I don't know maybe it's because SHE LIKES TAKUYA! Just like you like Agunimon

Kazemon : * blushes madly * w-what!

Beetlemon : C'mon K we know you like him.

Kazemon : N-No i-i d-don't

Me: one thing 4 sure

Me, Kazemon, and Beetlemon : KILL THAT GIRL.

Beetlemon : oh! Can I go all gansta with some snipers and glocks and mac-10's

Me: * sighs * yes. I wanted the mac-10's. Oh well a bazooka and AK -47 will do.

Beetlemon : BAZOOKA? ?

Me: yeah silly I need some wepon

Kazemon: Agunimon

Me: what?

Kazeymon: what?

Beetlemon : you said ' Agunimon '

Kazemon : shutup! LATERS OR WHATEVER THIS PHYSCO GIRL SAYS!

Me: THAT WAS MY LINE!
Kasumi nya chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
awesome story nya! And i do support de erth! nya. bie..!
BanetteGirl chapter 11 . 9/20/2009
nice story i love your work
ReadingWritingMusic1995 chapter 10 . 7/30/2009
aww, poor Zoe... *tear*
ReadingWritingMusic1995 chapter 9 . 7/30/2009
Oh, the next chapter is going to be fun...
ReadingWritingMusic1995 chapter 8 . 7/30/2009
Uh oh...tension between friends...
ReadingWritingMusic1995 chapter 7 . 7/30/2009
She did not just kiss Takuya? O, there is going to one rele pissed Zoe.

Ps- Sorry for saying pissed, if it offends you, i'm sorry, i just couldnt find the rite word at the moment.
ReadingWritingMusic1995 chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
My fav part was the outfit and the song. Omg, i couldnt stop laughing!
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