Reviews for Pretend
Mighty Zeea chapter 7 . 5/23/2009

that was awesome

poor zoe

update soon please please
Red Page chapter 7 . 5/23/2009
Whoa, that was unexpected. Man, Taky's in trouble. Well, good chapter. See ya later.
anime soso chapter 7 . 5/23/2009

that bitch marissa

i'm gunna kill her if she do that again

and i'm gunna kill takuya if he didn't apologize to zoe

and i'm gunna kill zoe if she didn't forgive takuya


can't WAIT for the next chapter

PLEASE please update SOON
don'tchaknowme4life chapter 7 . 5/22/2009
OMG! Marissa is so mean! oh the drama. please update soon!
TiRaMiSuLoVeR chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
haha Zoe was hilarious in this chapter! Can't wait to see what Marissa will do.
dingcs chapter 6 . 5/19/2009
HAHAHAHA! haha yeah.. whoo.. man that was funny. lol
duckie lover 151 chapter 6 . 5/19/2009
I loved it! I was laughing through the whole thing! Update soon!
anime soso chapter 6 . 5/19/2009

funny chapter

like it SO much

hope you update soon

can't wait
blackandblood chapter 6 . 5/19/2009
this has probably got to be one of the funniest stories i've ever read i cant wait for the next chapter please update soon :)
Mighty Zeea chapter 6 . 5/19/2009

update soon please please please
Chuckis chapter 5 . 5/18/2009
This FanFic is even better than Flipped!
TiRaMiSuLoVeR chapter 5 . 5/18/2009
haha omg so funny! Zoe was hilarious yelling out about Marissa's thighs. What Takuya said about Zoe was so sweet~

What he said about J.P. was super funny! He thought a girl was a trash can XD

Marissa is so weak...

Anyways loving this, and keep writing!
StarHobbit chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
HA HA LOL SO FUNNY HA HA HA oh I'd of loved to have seen that Marissa throwing up ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.. ha... ha out... of... breath... gotta... go... bye... BAM (faints)
duckie lover 151 chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
I got the feeling this would happen. You can only pretend to date somone for so long without actually falling in love with them. Great chapter! Update soon!
dingcs chapter 5 . 5/16/2009
LOL. can zoe make it more obvious? might as well take a mega-phnoe and stand on top of a boulder and yell out that marissa is fat. lol

nice chapter and good try on those ancroynm (sp?) poem. please update soon! laterz )
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