Reviews for Trust
Krysty chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
One word: yes.

Beautifully written! It is filled with so much emotion and it's just...powerful. Very powerful.

Thank you for sharing your beautiful writing with us! I love everything of yours that I have read so far!
Sepia Painter chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Oh! Chills up and down my spine!

My only critique: why on earth did you stop? There's so much emotion that comes to a boiling point by the end, and then it just dissipates into an abrupt finish...I'd strongly, strongly urge you to continue, if you're of a mind to. I can see this developing into a wonderful story, if not a longer one-shot.

As it is, however, wonderful written anyway! It doesn't NEED any more additions, but it would certainly because all the more beautiful because of them.

Brilliant! As are all the other's I've read so far. You have a knack, an undeniable talent, don't let it go for anything.
kaname-luvr chapter 1 . 5/25/2009

still cute!
lelalemon chapter 1 . 5/9/2009