|Reviews for Find My Place|
| DovahkiinGamer chapter 13 . 6/4
| ScOut4It chapter 3 . 3/31/2014
This is the most insightful possible reason for Rosalie's behavior towards Bella: her own insecurities. It all seems very logical and well reasoned. I always felt like Rosalie got the short end of the stick too in not even having a super power (unless super-sexy counts ;).
| ScOut4It chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
When doesn't Bella have a moment of crisis?
I thought you might have Bella overhearing Rosalie play... probably another time.
Moonlight Sonata is the best. It must be magical.
| ScOut4It chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
I love how Rosalie melted for Bella. And I like how you are keeping with the inner fortitude of a "Hale" by having Rosalie make a promise with herself to protect Bella (from herself or Edward if need be).
I think it would be nice if you gave Rosalie even more dynamics by expanding her interests. I think reading car magazines wouldn't be able to keep her occupied that much. Maybe she could be putting together model cars, or engineering cars. I would like to think, that if I lived as a youth until the age of 100 plus, that I would need (and do) more than mass produced biweekly mags to keep me sharp (certainly college instead of high school).
| Ferowyn chapter 19 . 2/16/2014
This fic is absolutely amazing. I'm sure everyone has told you so already, but I thought I'd have to as well - leaving this story un-commented is just not possible.
I LOVE it.
I love the way you portrayed Rosalie, and how you showed that no family is perfect, not even our favourite vampires. The 'flaws' you found for everyone were completely in character, and very credible.
The fall out was... heavy. I suffered with them; and in the end I also felt that it was worth it.
Probably my favourite scene is when Emmet has finished his gifts and is basically glowing, barely able to wait until he gets to give them to his family - and then the way Esme reacts when he comes to find her carrying a hammer. This scene speaks volumes about those two; and I adore it.
Also, i love your style. It's a pleasure to read. Please never give up writing.
| Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
:)(:Oh my gosh, this is brilliant. I'm already hooked.
| CrumblyBiscuit chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
HAPPY NEW YEAR
please write a sequel :)
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 17 . 11/7/2013
Awh that's actually really sweet.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Um, not trying to accuse anybody of anything but there's a twoshot called nightmare and it's almost exactly like this first chapter. I don't know if the author borrowed it or if you did, but you should probably clarify that for future readers.
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/8/2013
simply an amazing story. you have a gift for writing
| BSwifty1997 chapter 11 . 7/16/2013
Ill cary on readin- but damn i love this :) ur an amazing writer
| MamaMarie chapter 19 . 3/22/2013
Just read your story. I really like this "backdraft", this is the first time I have read where an author addresses Bella's feelings concerning the Cullens leaving.
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 14 . 1/1/2013
Amazing amazing story! I'll read the rest, but I'm going to forget what i was going to say if I don't say it now. I did sort of notice some of the problems within the family before, but I never thought that there could be a fic that was over 100000 words long about it. It actually seemed like a short story to me for some reason. I'm so glad that Bella and Rose bonded and that they found something to do together. I also like that Edward and Rosalie were able to bond more. the entire family seems more human than vampire... but I guess they always did and always will.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
| Ky chapter 5 . 10/13/2012
Chapter four brought tears to my eyes. It helped on a personal level too, thank you. Can't wait to finish the rest.
| featherdusterpixie chapter 18 . 9/2/2012