Reviews for The Symbiote and the Ghost Boy
flo463 chapter 3 . 6/24/2016
nice story so will you update and end this suspense please?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/17/2014
Is this it?
Omnitrix1 chapter 3 . 10/15/2009
Uh-oh. Please tell me Danny didn't just say he was going to keep the suit. Sure, it gives him new powers and improves his old ones, but if he keeps that suit on too long, it could take him over, make him do what it wants him to do. So will you please update and end this suspense?


I am the most powerful being in the universe

I have one million nine hundred three aliens on my Omnitrix

I have a stupid assistant named Tonto whose Omnitrix sucks

It has one million nine hundred two aliens on it!
Dracomancer1 chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
I advise you not to take the beaten plotline and instead male it so danny works with the symbiote. The whole parasite and power corruption schtick has been done to death over and over again. Write something unique. Good luck!
Nut and Shell chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
Nice chappie! I loved the part w/ skulker!
HermyStar chapter 3 . 5/24/2009
Oh Danny, you should've gone and seen that Spiderman movvie, but you decided to see some other movie. Tsk, tsk!
Kirby77DP77 chapter 2 . 5/16/2009
This is really... ok. It's a teeny bit boring since it follows the spiderman thing so well. can you throw in a really surprising event so we aren't bored? PLAESE?

HermyStar chapter 2 . 5/15/2009
Nut and Shell chapter 2 . 5/15/2009
Me likeie...

You seem to be doing well so far. It is a bit rushed but thats okay for now. If you update soon I'll have no choise but to favorite it... Or I could do it now...
HermyStar chapter 1 . 5/8/2009