Reviews for Phoebe in Wonderland
Mystic Lover of the fairytale chapter 5 . 1/4/2012
So when I saw this story I was excited because I have the dvd of Phoebe in Wonderland and thought it was a wonderful movie ,but this story is a bit disappointing because it doesn't really seem like it even touches on the subject of the movie ,you mentioned that Phoebe had Tourettes Syndrome but you didn't give any examples in the movie .Phoebe had weird rice she couldn't control that wasn't in here .Also symptoms of Tourettes don't show up until a child is nine Also since English doesn't seem to be your first language you should get a beta reader of course if you don't plan on updating the story you could ignore this review
LoveandLearn chapter 5 . 8/4/2009
i seriously love this story and i realy want to you to finish it.

glad u updated but it was short. please please please update again soon and make it longer!

i love the plot for this story and it deserves to be finished. PLease.
kcbienaime chapter 5 . 8/4/2009
thanx for updating. great chapter, love how you descride maya and logan as edward and bella. update soon. -kc
carlita-cap chapter 5 . 8/4/2009
yeah I love your story about that crazy family Good job !
kcbienaime chapter 4 . 8/3/2009
just read your story, and i love the start of the story. you havent updated in a while and i hope you update soon.
LoveandLearn chapter 4 . 7/6/2009
update please. wanna know what happens
LoveandLearn chapter 3 . 6/2/2009
intersting. cant wait to read more
McHobbit chapter 4 . 5/22/2009
I love how Addie is like Dashiell's mom, lol. I hope him and Anna get together.

And poor Nancy. I like how each kid has his/her own story
McMuffin chapter 4 . 5/22/2009
aw cute, I hope Nancy doesn't do something stupid!

More Addie/Noah in the next chap? :P
carlita-cap chapter 4 . 5/22/2009
yeah! Your story is great ! I want to know what is happening
McMuffin chapter 3 . 5/20/2009
Cute, I can't wait to see where you go with this...

There's just a few things that are irking me, could you please put capital letters t the beginnings of sentences and full stops at the ends? And sometimes it's a bit hard to tell who is saying what, but other than that this is good! :D
carlita-cap chapter 3 . 5/16/2009
It's great to see Addie with a big family

Please, post an other chapter !
McHobbit chapter 3 . 5/16/2009
Maya and Logan? Hm, good idea. Phoebe was so cute in this one. But i'm worried about Dashiell and Nancy, especially Nancy. I hope Addison and Noah find out about her eating disorder and help her!
carlita-cap chapter 2 . 5/15/2009
hey ! I like your story
McHobbit chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
I love the story idea, (and the movie) hate the pairing. But i will still read it because of the story line, i guess.

Btw, isn't Nancy Derek's sisters name? I guess you forgot, because it's weird that Derek and Addison would name their daughter that in this case?
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