|Reviews for Foundations|
| Eva chapter 12 . 6/14
I’m so sad this is over. It was wonderful.
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/15
Nooooooooooooo y did it eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeend
| Feddle chapter 12 . 3/31
Love this story so much. You wrought everything up so perfectly. I have no idea how you have so much foresight so long before you have written the later chapters. It is perfection.
Looking forward to reading the Foundations ficlets.
| LionRawrr chapter 12 . 3/10
Hi! This was amazing! Thank you!
| KitRahl chapter 12 . 3/6
I absolutely LOVED it!
| ookami-metsuki chapter 12 . 10/29/2017
Ok, first off, I am loving this story. Your work is impeccable, beautiful and moving. And you do sex scenes really, really well. Whoever told you there's too much sex in this story can choke on itor maybe just own up to enjoying it. Because while it's descriptive, it's all prevalent, illuminating their need to be close, or soothing on or the other's vulnerability, or throwing another dimension into their relationship. Thanks for the amazing story.
| DisenchantedGlow chapter 8 . 9/10/2017
oh! poor Romilda! Poor Clive! you had me in tears as soon as Harry's plan B didn't work. here's hoping Narcissa adopts him!
| Sarafinah chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
I wasn't sure what chapter to post a review in as I have just finished reading Reparations swiftly and addictively followed by Foundations. Your writing is astounding, the depth you jumped into with the characters and how well rounded they all were. By the end I wanted to have a pint with Harry, ravage Draco and high five Narcissa!
I loved everything about these stories, I read them a bit too quick as I was almost drunk on the story so am willing my brain to forget so I can start again and read them slower!
Awesome job, awesome stories, awesome writing.
Also, just a note on the length... IT WAS NOT LONG ENOUGH! I saw your comments at the start of the chapters apologising for the length of the chapters - I love it this way, so much better and fluid to read.
I am amazed.
| ansu chapter 12 . 7/30/2017
I read this and Reparations over the last few days and I must say that I trully enjoyed the ride (stories)! You write with passion and the characters were so - I don't have the word, but I could see and feel them while reading. They existed. I laughed, cried (must admit) and had a great time with this (and the previous one) story. I am not good with english words (not my native language) but I hope that you got the feeling that I had a blast! I especially fell in love with Cecile, and would be thrilled to read something with her in it!
So, thank you for this amazing story!
| unfittingpuzzlepieces chapter 12 . 6/9/2017
Yes to this.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/7/2017
Of all people malfoy would have recognised rita as a bug. Goblet of fire?
| Karen chapter 12 . 1/19/2017
There is so much I love about this story.
Love the evil peacock. The archaic pureblood crap and Cecile's way of giving advice. The Marley-Harry-dynamics. I think your Harry and Draco characterizations were great in Reparations already - what surprised me here was the character of Narcissa, I have never before read such a well-rounded, witty, slightly humurous Narcissa, and I love everything about the developing relationship between her and Harry.
Thank you so much for writing this - pera gratia!
| RHW chapter 12 . 1/9/2017
Again really enjoyed the story. I think, however you let Harry get into a routine with his work hours that wouldn't work for a junior healer/doctor. After He and Draco get together he only works a very small number of nights or weekends. I don't think he could possibly have every Friday night off (neither could Ron!) or every weekend (I think he was only called in once on a Sunday, and that wasn't even his shift). There was the possibility of more drama from the difficulty of getting together and the tiredness Harry would have been experiencing.
Saying that I still enjoyed the story very much.
| Ermahgersh chapter 12 . 12/29/2016
Best. Fan. Fiction. EVER! I loved it! You should make more!
| 2lazy2login P chapter 12 . 11/24/2016
Ahhh I love it I love it speechless truely...