|Reviews for Of Me, of Thee|
| 2 lazy 2 log in chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
that was really sweet, please could you do a story on the two of them?
| Ijusttaserdyou chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Very nice, good job
| pandarama chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
this is a beautiful song :D
i love dionysus, and its so rare to see him in ANY story (not just PJatO) and this one was definitely a treat :D hope to see more soon
| Peri Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
THIS IS DIONYSUS, PEOPLE- WRITING A LOVE POEM!
hey have you seen Bourne Ultimatum?
Do you read books before movies?
I read your profile. You're cool.
| Pragyan chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Look Ash the song has an element to be beautiful, feelings are there, structure is there, and perhaps the soul is missing. May be because of that you think it’s crap. But I think it's beautiful. It made me feel a music, :) wondering what music was there in your mind.
Suggestion: edit, edit and edit. Reconsider each line again (lines like “While I drunk beer, spirit, and wine; anything from a grape tree” or “Your grin lit up life like a fire bolt Thy persona struck me like a colt. “) and reconstruct. Before that decide what each part of the song will hold. Then it won't seem a piece of crap. It is a good work, can be really good, honestly.
All the best
| Nightmare Before Halloween chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
This is pretty good :D