|Reviews for Broken Strings, Last Words|
| NFN Girl chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Poor Sasuke TT
Sai: Which side are you in?
Jannah: POOR BOTH OF THEM!
| Fueled by Sloth chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Madame' Pixie! What have you done! :D
Oh my, Joey, well, this is AMAZING. I cannot begin to describe how emo you're becoming. Is angst the new thing now? I mean, seriously. But wow. You've had them go over a meaningful conversation that fit perfectly with the lyrics. And did I forget to mention, I was listening to this song everyday while I was MIA? Haha. Lol. When, I saw the title of this, I was getting confused with the OTHER one, but then, yeah. It's all very clear to me now. And again with the One Tree Hill reference. But it was one of my favorite break-ups because it really meant so much! I am also SO, SO proud of you because your writing is becoming so much more brilliant than it used to be. You're getting better at phrashing and everything! (Plus, I have too much access around you and your words I'm starting to pick it up. Lol-just a tad, P) So yeah! I'm so happy for that!
I like how you characterized Hinata more than you characterized Sasuke. I know you can write Naruto and Ino pretty well already. ;) But Sasuke in emotional angst is hard. Hardly does he ever cry, right? So, that was a challenge. And though, admittedly somewhat out of character, it still fits well with the story.:] The way you wrote this though, was better than the other one. ;)
And I liked the ending of this more. It just hurts more. I felt for this more. I should stop comparing your stories.
Goodness, this is getting extremely addicting. This song, your writing. You must get out of your writer's block rut and type a way like you're on a roll. Remember Christmas? It just kept coming. Okay, I hope this review is LONG ENOUGH because I know you love long reviews and a lot of wordiness.
I missed you loads, best friend! What an awesome welcome back gift, Pix. Thanks for the dedication. ILYouu.
P.s. I FCKNG WATCHED (LIKE RIGHT NOW) THE "FINALLY! THEY KISSED!" kiss of Danny and Sam! FINALLY! hahahaha.
| kljjlkjlkj chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
WOW. I really loved this. It was so terribly heartwrenching...AH I LOVED IT.
| Yoruichi 'Ino chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
this is so sad...
but that's what the dumb-butt gets for leaving
nice, nice ;D
| kiwi4me chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
but i like the way you phrased it all
i do think this to be true with them...
minus the sasuke being really emotional part.. :]
maybe a little lol
| i'llnevereverknow chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Aw, poor Sasuke! :(
Good for Ino tho!
Loved it as I have loved all your stories :)
Please update something soon!
Love, WolfFlowerz x