Reviews for Perfect Beauty
iwishiwasahsoka chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
that was really good!
at the beginning i was like thats cute, then i read the last part and i was like gasp! thats so sad
H09 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Hey, I really liked this fanfic :D Short, simple, bot not boring.
TheLightIsMine chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Huh. It seems I forgot to review this the first eight times I read it. No time like the present. XD This is sheer perfection. Honestly, I can't help but smile in admirable wonder as I read it. And then I cry at the end, because it's so sad, but you have captured their relationship perfectly. D
laloga chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Sad, but sweet. A nice take on Bly and Aayla's relationship. :)
BunBun Fett chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Wow. Just. Wow.

In just a few paragraphs you've managed to convey depth, emotion, and a stark reality that's strikingly haunting. Now, THAT'S good writing.

Brava!
KitFisto'sGirl chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
DO NOT make me cry. I repeat, DO NOT.

Why didd you have Bly shoot her? why would he do something like that?
Polgarawolf chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Oh. O. Hell. That ending's a sucker punch. I mean, yes, okay, I know how she dies, in the movie. I KNOW that. But I wasn't expecting it. The build-up of their bond is so powerful that I was honestly expecting something else - an AU twist or the relevation that it was someone else who took that shot at her from behind or SOMETHING - and not the blind obedience to Order 66. And then I wasn't expecting the emptiness haunting him, afterwards, so really, it's a double sucker punch.

The way you describe their bond is lyrical and moving and just - god, I hate what Sidious did to them. I HATE it. It makes my heart hurt.
Clonetroopers-DarthMaul chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Is Aayla Secura your favorite character?

She one of my fav characters besides Lord Maul,Clonetroopers,

Padme',Adi Gallia,and Ahsoka Tano.

Please wirte back! i need to know.
TitanWolf chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
i really liked this you captured Bly's mindset perfectly. also come read my Star Wars FF and tell me how it is.
Mirkenza-H chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
i loved it! I write these two (as a pairing), and i thught you captured a good scenario for Bly's thoughts during Order 66, and his respect for Aayla.
Sabby87 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
I liked this story very much. It's short but powerful, it moved me.

Nice insight into Bly's mind ;) .
sateda chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
sad at the end :( sniff, but was good
reka1207 chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
this is really good!
Spand chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
i loved it great job
Otulissa chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
tear

I didn't see that coming.