Reviews for Darkness and Decisions
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Damn child, you are good, nigh on to exceptional. You so nailed the truth of Jack's soul at this time-you gave an hugely plausible explanation for his "non-response" to being hugged and kissed by this woman he has so desired for so long. Utterly lovely even in the cold, the pain, the loss and the sadness of yet another demolished dream. Wow! Ya done good!
M. S. Arora chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Excellent! The description at the beginning regarding the Pearl was very impressive – your vocabulary definitely deserves praise. The anxiety and remorse came through really accurately, underlining the close relationship between Jack and the Pearl.

‘Captain Sparrow dies here I know that, just don’t ask Jack to chose it’ – VERY powerful sentence, there. I like the way you’ve elaborated every last moment of that scene until the very end. Good work! :)

MsAurora
The Imaginative Light chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
This is a great piece. At the end of DMC I was so mad at Elizabeth that I just wanted to shoot her! By seeing it through Jack's eyes makes me loathe her even more. And I like it :D