Reviews for Sam
Assasin Nero chapter 16 . 1/20
so sam believes in physical intimacy and sev believes in emotional.. hmm..

I still like severus more. I cant help but imagine that he is duping evans.. that is really bad.
Assasin Nero chapter 15 . 1/20
hm.. sometimes, I rather hate ..
Assasin Nero chapter 14 . 1/20
my heart... great chapter

man.. whoever your beta was, did a half assed job of editing things. I insist that revise the chaps anf remove the errors.
Assasin Nero chapter 13 . 1/20
I wish she chooses sev over sam before he tells her the truth.
Assasin Nero chapter 11 . 1/20
now that's what I am talkin' about!
Assasin Nero chapter 9 . 1/20
I think I like sev better :)
Assasin Nero chapter 8 . 1/20
hm.. okay chapter. Amusingly enough, this chapter had less erfors than the earlier ones
Assasin Nero chapter 7 . 1/20
snog her senseless when used so many times, loses its appeal. Believe me. Its not romantic at all. You could've given some descriptions of sev's love for lily, instead of him only thinking about kissing her. It'd be alright if he were sirius, or james; but sev was more of an emotional being, i think. The physical side, you can show through lily..
Assasin Nero chapter 6 . 1/20

nice chap.. love that lily is atleast civil towards sev now...

and I gotta say, the letters to sam are tooooooooooo sappy
Assasin Nero chapter 5 . 1/20
that is a new view on severus snape..
Assasin Nero chapter 3 . 1/20
I will reserve my judgement till the fic ends, but if she chooses sam over sev, I will be sorely disappointed. Sam is not sev, just a fa├žade. If she cant accept him for who he is, I'd rather wish he stay single all his life.
Assasin Nero chapter 2 . 1/20
the dialogue flow is pretty rough, there are many grammatical errors..

The plot is nice though.
Assasin Nero chapter 1 . 1/18
this is kinda realistic.. great start.
Blairx6661 chapter 31 . 5/12/2014
Even though I have some unanswered questions (like what happened to Voldemort, and does Harry exist in this story in some different way), I still really enjoyed this story and am glad it ended so well :)

District12Survivor chapter 31 . 12/6/2013
This is such an amazing story. I loved it start to finish and stayed up until... gosh... 2:06 am to read the entire thing... thank you so much. What a wonderful contribution to the Snape and Lily shipping.
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