Reviews for Sam
Griffygnus chapter 16 . 1/20/2015
so sam believes in physical intimacy and sev believes in emotional.. hmm..

I still like severus more. I cant help but imagine that he is duping evans.. that is really bad.
Griffygnus chapter 15 . 1/20/2015
hm.. sometimes, I rather hate ..
Griffygnus chapter 14 . 1/20/2015
my heart... great chapter

man.. whoever your beta was, did a half assed job of editing things. I insist that revise the chaps anf remove the errors.
Griffygnus chapter 13 . 1/20/2015
I wish she chooses sev over sam before he tells her the truth.
Griffygnus chapter 11 . 1/20/2015
now that's what I am talkin' about!
Griffygnus chapter 9 . 1/20/2015
I think I like sev better :)
Griffygnus chapter 8 . 1/20/2015
hm.. okay chapter. Amusingly enough, this chapter had less erfors than the earlier ones
Griffygnus chapter 7 . 1/20/2015
snog her senseless when used so many times, loses its appeal. Believe me. Its not romantic at all. You could've given some descriptions of sev's love for lily, instead of him only thinking about kissing her. It'd be alright if he were sirius, or james; but sev was more of an emotional being, i think. The physical side, you can show through lily..
Griffygnus chapter 6 . 1/20/2015
definitely*

nice chap.. love that lily is atleast civil towards sev now...

and I gotta say, the letters to sam are tooooooooooo sappy
Griffygnus chapter 5 . 1/20/2015
that is a new view on severus snape..
Griffygnus chapter 3 . 1/20/2015
I will reserve my judgement till the fic ends, but if she chooses sam over sev, I will be sorely disappointed. Sam is not sev, just a fa├žade. If she cant accept him for who he is, I'd rather wish he stay single all his life.
Griffygnus chapter 2 . 1/20/2015
the dialogue flow is pretty rough, there are many grammatical errors..

The plot is nice though.
Griffygnus chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
this is kinda realistic.. great start.
Blairx6661 chapter 31 . 5/12/2014
Even though I have some unanswered questions (like what happened to Voldemort, and does Harry exist in this story in some different way), I still really enjoyed this story and am glad it ended so well :)

xxx
District12Survivor chapter 31 . 12/6/2013
This is such an amazing story. I loved it start to finish and stayed up until... gosh... 2:06 am to read the entire thing... thank you so much. What a wonderful contribution to the Snape and Lily shipping.
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