Reviews for Sam |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hm.. sometimes, I rather hate .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() my heart... great chapter man.. whoever your beta was, did a half assed job of editing things. I insist that revise the chaps anf remove the errors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish she chooses sev over sam before he tells her the truth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() now that's what I am talkin' about! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I like sev better :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm.. okay chapter. Amusingly enough, this chapter had less erfors than the earlier ones |
![]() ![]() ![]() snog her senseless when used so many times, loses its appeal. Believe me. Its not romantic at all. You could've given some descriptions of sev's love for lily, instead of him only thinking about kissing her. It'd be alright if he were sirius, or james; but sev was more of an emotional being, i think. The physical side, you can show through lily.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely* nice chap.. love that lily is atleast civil towards sev now... and I gotta say, the letters to sam are tooooooooooo sappy |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is a new view on severus snape.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will reserve my judgement till the fic ends, but if she chooses sam over sev, I will be sorely disappointed. Sam is not sev, just a façade. If she cant accept him for who he is, I'd rather wish he stay single all his life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the dialogue flow is pretty rough, there are many grammatical errors.. The plot is nice though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is kinda realistic.. great start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though I have some unanswered questions (like what happened to Voldemort, and does Harry exist in this story in some different way), I still really enjoyed this story and am glad it ended so well :) xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such an amazing story. I loved it start to finish and stayed up until... gosh... 2:06 am to read the entire thing... thank you so much. What a wonderful contribution to the Snape and Lily shipping. |
![]() ![]() Oh wow, this is possibly one of the best Snape fanfictions I've read so far. Your storyline is original and exhilarating, and I love it! |