Oh goodness. This story was terrible! You have got to get some grammar lessons! And the spelling...terrible. It has a good plot, it I got the plot right, but the typo's are bad. You even misspelled the title. Get a beta. Trust me, it will help. You have got to spend more time on your stories. This seemed rushed. Just my thoughts.

awsome story

please update now

the typos are really annoying and just out of nowhere he says he is hard kinda weird its ok other than that

so best friends hand job ? update soon i would love to know where you are taking this

Pleas continue

please cotninue

at what part of the show is this- pre commitment, dating, exclusive, or after the proposal?