|Reviews for Zio Bell|
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/6
Bring in my oc. His name is alec. He is a long haired half vietnamese kid. He is a child prodigy and has invented a hover board. He has a second personality that he morphs into. It is a girl named samantha.
| silver fire wolf chapter 15 . 3/21/2013
If your still accepting Mamodos and partners I have one, if not oh well *shugs*
Appearance: Deza looks a lot like a boy with short spiky red tipped black hair, red and black eyes, and tan skin. She wears a black jacket over a crimson red t shirt that has a chain connecting the two parts together, blue jeans, and red and black shoes their's a sheathed sword on her back
Powers: Deza's powers revolve around Ice and her sword
Personality: Deza is a bit of a snob and a fairly big tomboy and jerk. Yet she's a very caring person, mainly toward her partner and his best friend. She often tries to say she's a 'cruel demon' but if you watch how she acts it contradicts it. She's rather ruthless in battle and tends to get hurt.
Reason she joined: at first for the power now she doesn't seem to care and is being conflicted by her original goals and what she wants now
Icade: She slams her hand down and ice forms on the ground, she can move on it without problems
Icseade: Ice floats around her sword and freezes things she cuts
(both spells have a 3 minute time limit)
Icsiladode: Ice floats around her, and her partner(and his best freind), and acts like a shield and freezing attacks
IcacorSeade: Her sword glows blue and if she swipes it a blade of ice goes out towards her opponent
Book color: a very dark blue, midnight blue
Name: Cain Leife
Appearance: ...A flat chested girl with short wavy black hair, blind eye, and pale skin. He wears a green t shirt, red earnings, white and red pants, and black shoes.
Personality: Cain is a clam collected teen with the 'spirit of a healer'. He's very wise for his age and, medically wise, very knowledgeable.
Reasons for helping Deza: he hopes to get her to see power isn't every thing
Meet Deza: in his family's herb garden
Other: Cain is indeed blind so his book's in Brail as well, he was born blind
*Cain is probably the reason Deza hasn't died from battle, due to having a lot of medical/herb knowledge
*Cain has a bow and arrow that he can, for what ever weird anime/manga reason, use and hit targets flawlessly
Name: Koori Kitsune
Appearance: Has short silvery-white-blue hair, blue eyes, and pale skin. He wears glasses, a white t shirt, a blue jacket, blue jeans, and black shoes
Personality: He's fairly shy and timid and very quite and intelligent. He tends to hide the former two with a freindly 'mask'.
Info: Koori is Cain's best friend who decided to travel with Cain and Deza. He doesn't do much when it comes to the battles but he's very knowledgeable about the places they go, as well as the languages and cultures, he's often the translator. He's never seen without a stack of books.
| innovator1 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Well nice chapter, nice battle. I don't however understand how old Zio is or how long it's been after the battle for king. Well that's my intake for today. I'll read some more tomorrow.
| xmono-chrome chapter 15 . 1/14/2012
I just started reading this story yesterday and I really love it and the ideas that you put on it. I hope you keep continuing with it.
If you still need an OC Mamodo, here's mine as an idea:
Partner name: Kalina
Personality: Although she normally serious, Kalina does love to travel and explore. She usually acts mature for her age.
History: Kalina lived her normal life with her parents in South Korea until she then started to like traveling and exploring. just before she met her mamodo, she ran away from home due to wanting to explore many areas. She knows that what her mamodo is doing is wrong, but Kalina still obeys her partner and battles anyway.
Ability: She is usually able to come up with plans for attack in battle with the use of her surroundings
Appearance: She is pale skinned, with short dark brown hair that goes to her shoulders, dark blue eyes. She wears a hanbok that's a golden yellow color on top and pink on bottom with a golden yellow sash wrapped around her waist and sandals.
Mamodo name: Aleah
Personality: She's very demanding and childish and just loves to complain but does get serious when it's time for battle.
Book Color: Baby Blue
Reason for being in the fight: She mainly came to the Human World due to not wanting to stay in the Mamodo World for a while. However, she is very willing to fight any mamodo that they meet due to believing that it's only destiny to all mamodo to fight. Kalina does not approve of this but the two continue to fight anyway.
1. Akur-Aleah can summon water from her hands to use for attacking and can move it freely
2. Akshield-A dome like barrier made of water is used to protect both Aleah and Kalina
3. Gigano Akur-A much stronger version of Akur but much harder for Aleah to control the spell's movements
4. Ganzu Akurga-Aleah fire multiple Akurs at her opponents
5. Dioga Akur-(Ultimate Spell) A serpent made out of water is summoned to attack her opponents.
6. Ex Akurga-A more concentrated version of Akur that only attacks at the direction that Aleah's hands are aiming at but the same power as Gigano Akur. It's also shaped like an "x"
Appearance: Aleah is pale skinned with black hair down to her waist, and has a large indigo bow on top of her head. She has light blue eyes, wears a dress that's white on top, indigo on bottom and a black belt around her waist and wears indigo colored slip ons.
PM me if you need anything else.
| Aldamonburst chapter 14 . 1/26/2011
that was cool! by the way, does jikerse have any additional effects?
| Aldamonburst chapter 13 . 1/26/2011
good chapter! i'm really getting interested now
| Aldamonburst chapter 12 . 1/26/2011
a poison mamodo. cool. good chapter. and lol, naomi strikes back!
| Aldamonburst chapter 11 . 1/26/2011
cool! interesting reunion.
| Aldamonburst chapter 10 . 1/26/2011
interesting character. good chapter for one without a battle.
| Aldamonburst chapter 9 . 1/25/2011
chainz and slash! i read about them in another fic! awesome chapter good portrayal of the brothers.
| Aldamonburst chapter 8 . 1/25/2011
ok sorry but as good as this story is the character traits and development are kinda shallow.
| Aldamonburst chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
yay! it's nya! one of my favorite mamodo! ( animal mamodo rock!) good chapter! i wish i found this fic earlier!
| Aldamonburst chapter 6 . 1/25/2011
good chapter, but there's no description for leon.
| Aldamonburst chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
Good, but everyone seems to realize things a bit fast
| Aldamonburst chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
good chapter. i'd have to rate most of the spells 6-8, as they're cool but hardly original.