Reviews for Tired
The Magic Pocket Turtle chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
HEY

You gonna finish this? Because I know I'm interested.
ricky147896325 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Wow first he's sleepy then the next day he's angry & can drag Red Menace O.o

I like it XD

Pitch ideas:

Try focusing on Voltar's "alien" DNA, then the blood test saying he's hitting puberty or something & who his parents or parent is/are XD
Sonar chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Nicely done. Really want to see some more.
sanddoombuggy chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
sweet... im curious as to whats going on.

im pumped for the next chapter!
Arbiterai Knight chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Psht. I have a feeling how this is going to turn out, but:

does he have anemia?
majorfangirl chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Gotta...read...MORE! What's wrong with Voltar? IS HE REALLY A WOMAN WHOSE PREGNANT? Sorry. Had to be said.
ArkhamInmate195 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Well done. I like how you're developing the characters in this story!
AzelmaandEponine chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Wolfyfox chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
this is new. cant wait for the next chapter