|Reviews for Surprises Never Cease|
| BlueDiamondStar chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I think this's good story.
Though few times I found myself confused by the events and jumping between.
Altogether it was interesting to read.
But I'd liked if there'd be few more chapters, like two, three, with more details. It'd be more natural flow.
But it's probably just me
| PuckurtPartieLover chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I like the idea of the story however I think writing it as a one shot made it very disconnected and hard to beleive. I think you should re write it and make it longer put more information in, more suspense you know so that it doesn't jump so much.