Reviews for Blink of an Eye
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Good move.

Better response.

Live a little, Rae. You've earned it.
AnNyanimous chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Raven's a fast thinker XD

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reaper with no name chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Very nicely written. A short but good introspective fic.
severineyung chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Wow. Truly is an "innocent question to spark profound thoughts.", good way of summarizing this.

Nice metaphor of struggling in a cage. For some reason, I particularly found these phrases interesting, they made me 'think beyond the words'.

He gave her freedom with an outstretched hand and a meat free dinner, "candlelit, pleasantly aromatic." There's something about the whole 'aura' that's created in this description, something more deeply hidden in the word 'aromatic.'

and

Hope that was "white and pure." Hope that "let her grow."

(Especially enjoyed the 'growing' image-more original and even more meaningful to Raven's situation)

Overall this is a good example where short 'moments' in life can be expressed to its more intricate details by the art of a writer. Great work!
KatSin chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
_ this was sweet.
Lady Infamous chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
That was so well-written and portrayed, right from the disclaimer till the end!

GOOD JOB!

WRITE ON!
Cylor chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
An honest, believable and insightful look inside Raven's head. I like it.
ultimateedge chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
bless, how sweet and honest. your disclaimers are fantastic by the way.
Wolvmbm chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
Wow, that was a deep and wise story in showing just how much Love can cause Raven so much trouble to her. :(

Yet, she is truly afraid to love at all. :(

Please keep up this good work upon any great future story that you have plan. ;)