|Reviews for A New Journey|
| TerribleTurtle chapter 43 . 3/12
This story is amazing! Great shipping and just really good overall. I think anyone who is interested in pokemon fanfiction should read this story.
| vavoysh chapter 58 . 3/10
Can't help but notice that you said you were going to continue to update this...
| Miss Starfire chapter 58 . 3/8
"I just don't car what happened to..." I think you meant "care." Btw, when are you going to update? I mean, there's no pressure even though I also live in ATX and can find you ;) Hopefully you can update soon. And, honestly IMHO, updating late is not the worse thing you can do to your readers; not finishing the story is.
| Miss Starfire chapter 57 . 3/8
"Charizard gave his friend a puzzled look. If they weren't gonna burn him, how else could they wake him up?" - Pokemon logic: AWESOME.
Now, as far as the sleeping together before marriage issue, the only offense I take is that some people assume that saving yourself for marriage is just a Christian person's goal, as if the rest of us are constant sinners. I am the least religious person you've ever met but I did just that: waited until I got married because that was what felt right for me. I don't regret it but I don't shove it on people's face either.
If anyone gets mad at you for having these two characters do this "before their time," then they don't deserve to be following or reading your story. In fact, that makes them hypocrites, because the world, like you said, is not a fairytale and these things happen everywhere, at all times, between many people. It also makes them narrow-minded, maybe even elitists to some degree, because they want everyone else to submit to their standards and those who don't are not worthy of their time, to what they think is right because "God said so." Not all Christians are like that, and I know it because, believe it or not, I married one. Don't ask me how it works, but it does. Maybe because we have the same values even though I've never read the Bible and didn't even marry under the Church, just the law. Good morals character is not exclusive of Christians. There are some of us that just follow similar values because it's the right thing to do.
Anyway, awesome story and chapter as always. Now, on to the next one!
| Miss Starfire chapter 56 . 3/8
Dude, you better not do this again. I see that you haven't updated since October :'(
| Miss Starfire chapter 55 . 3/8
OK. So I guess I should be shipping you with PP8 ;)
Oh, and the chapter: so swweeeetttt! You're absolutely right. We need more AAMR and AAML fics 'round here.
| Guest chapter 54 . 3/8
| Miss Starfire chapter 53 . 3/7
I feel just like Ash. I was cringing the whole time.
| Miss Starfire chapter 52 . 3/7
I have a bad feeling about this.
| Miss Starfire chapter 51 . 3/7
Oh. I forgot this for the previous chapter:
...according to Lance over the phone, had been reported as completely gone...
Was that really Lance or someone else?
"You shouldn't let your fears about us effect your decision." - affect
| Miss Starfire chapter 50 . 3/7
OK, now I'm so confused. What the heck? I honestly thought Red is Misty's dad. I mean, Giovanni said his mother had done the same to Misty's parents...and then, that flashback Misty had about hiding in the closet or being shushed by her sisters...I guess I gotta keep reading.
| Miss Starfire chapter 49 . 3/7
Smooth, TL! Very Smooth. That "I love you" hit me like a brick. Out of freaking nowhere.
| Miss Starfire chapter 48 . 3/7
Pokemon dying is always sad. I mean, I've done it, too, but it's still sad.
| Miss Starfire chapter 47 . 3/7
You know you are doing your job well if you get death threats.
| Miss Starfire chapter 46 . 3/7