|Reviews for Octopus' Garden|
| The Predatory Wasp chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
this was good.
when i saw the title i knew i had to read it:)
i love the beatles.
| rainbowfish22 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
I really like this. Leah's in character, and it's well written. I liked the line about Emily being dead to Leah.
I think you gave some constructive criticism for my stories, so I wanted to find some for you, but I can't. Sorry. xD.
| VividInk chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Oh my goodness, Leah didn't jump over the cliff did she? Or at least that's how I interpreted it... UPDATE
| BeautifulPieces chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
So well written...
Write more please ...
| luv4ed chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Wow u should continue this...maybe write about the guilt everyone must be feeling (even though i really hate Emily) or write about leah survivng...but if u do dont make it all cheezy where leah wakes up and sees jake and suddenly he realises how much he loves her and she becomes alight with joy(*enter sarcassm here*).lol
Only a select few write about, or i should say write well, h everyone treats Emily and sam as if they are the ones tht had suffered what Leah sometimes i just wish tht everyone would truly see tht they all had a hand in ma
| 2013as chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
awesome :) sad at the end, but really good ..
| LoveIt123 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
wow great writing x
| peaceISmyANTIdrug chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
are you going to kep going cause its really good
| BLACKWATER4EVR chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
omg, thats so sad!