Reviews for Octopus' Garden
The Predatory Wasp chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
this was good.

when i saw the title i knew i had to read it:)

i love the beatles.
rainbowfish22 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
I really like this. Leah's in character, and it's well written. I liked the line about Emily being dead to Leah.

I think you gave some constructive criticism for my stories, so I wanted to find some for you, but I can't. Sorry. xD.

Good job.
VividInk chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Oh my goodness, Leah didn't jump over the cliff did she? Or at least that's how I interpreted it... UPDATE
BeautifulPieces chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
So well written...

Write more please ...
luv4ed chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Wow u should continue this...maybe write about the guilt everyone must be feeling (even though i really hate Emily) or write about leah survivng...but if u do dont make it all cheezy where leah wakes up and sees jake and suddenly he realises how much he loves her and she becomes alight with joy(*enter sarcassm here*).lol

Only a select few write about, or i should say write well, h everyone treats Emily and sam as if they are the ones tht had suffered what Leah sometimes i just wish tht everyone would truly see tht they all had a hand in ma
2013as chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
awesome :) sad at the end, but really good ..
LoveIt123 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
wow great writing x
peaceISmyANTIdrug chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
are you going to kep going cause its really good
BLACKWATER4EVR chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
omg, thats so sad!

please continue!