Reviews for Pokemon
duelmaster81301 chapter 1 . 3/1
Buffafro? Discodeer? I'm pretty sure those aren't Pokemon.
Echos of 2008-2009 chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
hey i really like this you should continue
Formerly Chilltown chapter 5 . 6/8/2009
Meowth's should have some Team Rocket, maybe a little blasting off. Again, yes. xD
Mr. Pichu chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
AT first, I didn't get it, but then I remembered the flame must go on or the Char-whatever evolution he heappenes to be won't... Right?
Cerulean City chapter 3 . 5/13/2009
If you do all 493, you deserve a medal or something, and lots of adoration.

At the same time, to continue in this vein, more personality is needed. Already, your characters have run together, and three descriptions of the Bulbasaur line sleeping? Not very engaging. Pump some life into them, and you'll have an excellent fic going.

Your descriptions are sound, however.


N.L. Mars chapter 2 . 5/11/2009
I like the idea of somethine like this, but I personally find the stories to be too short for my liking, and too boring to make me want to read on. I'm sorry if that sounded harsh.

This is a great concept to do, but maybe add more of a plotline into each chapter.

Though, allow me to applaud your descriptive writing. It's very brilliant.

Keep up the good work.
Echos of 2008-2009 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
finally yosh, you wrote something a little differnt and something that i'll actully read. maybe...?
pika123 chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
excellent point of reviews ;)